Comment from Stu Harrell

Excellent

Great stuff.......light and bouncy...burly and curly....."cutsey and bootsey"......I can see why you won the contest.....All the Best......Stu Harrell

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021

Hahaha. ..thank you! I appreciate it. :)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a great story in your poem! And what a great motivational theme to engage children in community service. I wish I had involved my own kids more in volunteering with me. Congratulations in the win!!

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021

Thank you for this thoughtful review, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

What a bouncy, clever and well-rhymed poem that is sure to be enjoyed by children of all ages. The park described sounds just like the one close to my house where my grandchildren like to play. I think this is a wonderful motivational poem that serves a double purpose. What a great way to remind children how important it is to be tidy. Good luck in the contest. MM

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021

Thank you for this wonderful review, it's so exciting to hear from you. :)

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello anonymous

Great entry for the Kiddies motivational poem writing prompt contest. It's the kind of poem that would appeal to children with good rhythm and a positive story behind the poem.

Teaching kids to clean up the park is a wonderful idea.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021

Thank you, I really appreciate hearing from you. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

It is good to teach our children not to drop litter and to keep parks tidy and when enjoying a picnic leave the spot as clean as it was when you arrived, a fine thought, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021

Thank you for reading and for your kind words. :)

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

This is the only one I've found that would be able to be read and appeal to kids. This clearly is motivational. This poem encourages children to clean up and not to litter. Also to have safe fun. I am voting for this one.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021

Thank you for this great review and for your vote! Both are appreciated. :)

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

this is a wonderful and inspirational write for kids! I love the message of caring for our sweet Mother earth. It is accompanied by n appealing picture for the write.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021

Thank you, I appreciate your positive comments. :)

Comment from AprilViolet

Exceptional

You should seriously consider writing children's poems! This was engaged and motivating for both kids and adults alike. I love the message and the positive message you are Sending! Exceptional!

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021

Thank you, what a wonderful review, it made my night. :)

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is an awesome poem. Very well written poem for children. Nice flow and rhyme scheme. Great presentation. Nice background colour and font. Good luck in the contest. ð???

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021

Thank you for reading and for such a nice review. :)

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

This is a great motivational poem for kids. It flows smoothly and rhymes well, and has a positive message, that even little kids can make a big difference. (Just note that in the fourth stanza, Mike's name needs a capital letter.) Good wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021

Thank you very much for reading. That pesky grammar! I appreciate the correction. ,:)