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Last Warm Embrace

Memories Of Early Love

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Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Oh - irishauthorme, this love poem is so lovely. Many will identify with this. So beautifully descriptive and reminiscent of an early love. Whatever happens I don't think we ever forget our first love, no matter how happy we may be now. Loved your poem - Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
    Dorothy, you are a Sweetheart! I can tell you went through something like this, which was written from a life experience. I will read your writing!
    irish
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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We never forget that first love, no matter how many years pass. I remember his face, and I remember our very first date when my father took me to meet him outside the cinema, and was waiting for me when we came out! Lol. This is a lovely poem and brought back more memories for me. Well done! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
    Hi, Sandra, IU can tell you went through something like this. I wrote this from a life experience, which is where I write the best.
    Warm Regards, irish
Comment from Leann DS
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Oh, I had a love like that also. Your words ring true for me, as they surely do for so many. There's nothing like first love.

If I may, I found two typographical error's:

True, opposites we were,Ã?

Now, in my daily thoughtsÃ?



I really enjoyed your poem. The rhyme was good and so was the flow of the words and stanzas. Hugs to you.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
    Thank you, Leann, I found and corrected the A's of unknown origin. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
    irish
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This poem speaks candidly, lovingly and confidently all love moments at teenage are ever framed in gold frame and captured in the heart and lovers keep waiting to feel the same excitement long after; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
    Hey, thank you for reading and reviewing, I could tell from your words that you went through something like this.
    irish
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about the very first live we experience at a tender age is everlasting and is the one we will always long for. When the lovers don't end up together in their youth, they may find each other later in their life or in the afterlife.

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 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your in-depth review! This is true for me, found my long lost love but we are both in another family so all we share are memories.
    irish