Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, anonymous,

Great entry for the 2-5-2 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Attractive presentation. Nice alliteration and imagery.

I love sunrise.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021

Thank you for the read and the feedback. Appreciated.

Comment from greyson ernst

Excellent

this is really really good and the picture is perfect though i think sun rise is sunrises or do you mean sun rises not sunrise but as always keep writing and stay safe


sincerely Greyson Ernst

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021

I had to look this up, but I believe rise in this case is an intransitive verb describing what the sun is doing at day break. I meant sun rises. Thanks for your read and review.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

You have a strong steady beat and a poem with rhythm. The sun bringing forth the waking world is clear and so true. You capture an image of nature in few words.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Much appreciated.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Writer,

This is a nice, simple poem with the correct syllable count for the contest. It doesn't say anything shattering, but it does remind us of those beautiful first moments of the day. How lovely! Thanks!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Much appreciated.
I'm often up early and go outside at day break, the moment the sun peeks is awesome.