The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 80 "Obedience"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The doctors and nurses and healthcare workers are very carefule in testing for covid before they begin their work. I have much faith in their care and concern for others.
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The doctors and nurses and healthcare workers are very carefule in testing for covid before they begin their work. I have much faith in their care and concern for others.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I had to go into the hospital this summer for a same day procedure. There were plenty of empty beds all over. My husband strolled around and checked while he waited for me. I think all of this is a piece of cramp and we've bought off on it.
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I had to go into the hospital this summer for a same day procedure. There were plenty of empty beds all over. My husband strolled around and checked while he waited for me. I think all of this is a piece of cramp and we've bought off on it.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
Comment from royowen
The photo looks like the call to prayer time at the mosque, except they're on the street. I haven't seen one nurse or doctor I could identify as such Iza, only the the "ambos" in their ambulance, well done, blessings Roy
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The photo looks like the call to prayer time at the mosque, except they're on the street. I haven't seen one nurse or doctor I could identify as such Iza, only the the "ambos" in their ambulance, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
Comment from estory
Another great coronavirus rant; This time you talk about how the government could be using this to control us; you speak of not having evidence of what they are telling us in the news. you can't trust anything. Except you own eyes. Yes its a sad world, the world of manipulation, in the communist countries it came from the Communist party; over here, it comes from corporations. estory
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Another great coronavirus rant; This time you talk about how the government could be using this to control us; you speak of not having evidence of what they are telling us in the news. you can't trust anything. Except you own eyes. Yes its a sad world, the world of manipulation, in the communist countries it came from the Communist party; over here, it comes from corporations. estory
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
Comment from Carlos' girl
Most excellent and thoughtful. Yes, I too have thought many of the ideas you write of here. Hitler did start small, and mind control is not that for removed from us now in the pandemic. Yes I envision a police state soon. And we have restaurants closing, but what happens when food shortages and bank and government shutdowns occur? Scarey
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Most excellent and thoughtful. Yes, I too have thought many of the ideas you write of here. Hitler did start small, and mind control is not that for removed from us now in the pandemic. Yes I envision a police state soon. And we have restaurants closing, but what happens when food shortages and bank and government shutdowns occur? Scarey
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the story and the message you deliver... it deserves a five.
I notice some minor typo for your considerations.
why not controll - control
doctors are come to work - doctors come to work
they are change in the hospital - they change in the hospital
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I like the story and the message you deliver... it deserves a five.
I notice some minor typo for your considerations.
why not controll - control
doctors are come to work - doctors come to work
they are change in the hospital - they change in the hospital
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
You are right on the ball with your thinking about the virus. I agree with you to that nurses and doctors should not wear their hospital clothes outside and bring more germs back into the hospital.
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You are right on the ball with your thinking about the virus. I agree with you to that nurses and doctors should not wear their hospital clothes outside and bring more germs back into the hospital.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Compelling and sobering indeed!
striped=>stripped us
you [ARE] supposed to be in freaking [locked down=>lockdown]! What the heck are [YOU] doing on the streets?
[It's=>IS IT] Coronella behind this shaking news, or is [IT] the government?
now=>NEW apps
why not controlling=>CONTROL all of us at once and [separating=>SEPARATE] us [in=>INTO group]s: sick, healthy and [COmMA] [eventual=>EVENTUALLY (+comma)] exposed?
My heart sinks EVERYTIME I SEE AN ambulance in front of my building. I SEE them DRESSED in those "cool" and alien SUITS. I get it they need to BE protected, but why are they STRIPPING OFF their COSTUMES in front of the ambulance[SEMICOLON] shouldn't they finish the transport and then get RID of the protective equipment?
WHY ARE nurses and doctors using their scrubs as street attire?
I CAN'T tell you how many times I have travelled with nurses in the subway.
you CAN'T tell me that for them IT is Halloween EVERY DAY of the year. You see, in Romania the doctors COME to work in normal clothes and they CHANGE in the hospital.
You see[COMMA] Coronella is the perfect mask; [omit:WHERE] you can do whatever you feel as a government and control us some more. You see THERE are revolts everywhere. I think the great awakening HAS started. Coronella's days are numbered... but IT can MUTATE INTO a new STRAIN, so stand by.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Compelling and sobering indeed!
striped=>stripped us
you [ARE] supposed to be in freaking [locked down=>lockdown]! What the heck are [YOU] doing on the streets?
[It's=>IS IT] Coronella behind this shaking news, or is [IT] the government?
now=>NEW apps
why not controlling=>CONTROL all of us at once and [separating=>SEPARATE] us [in=>INTO group]s: sick, healthy and [COmMA] [eventual=>EVENTUALLY (+comma)] exposed?
My heart sinks EVERYTIME I SEE AN ambulance in front of my building. I SEE them DRESSED in those "cool" and alien SUITS. I get it they need to BE protected, but why are they STRIPPING OFF their COSTUMES in front of the ambulance[SEMICOLON] shouldn't they finish the transport and then get RID of the protective equipment?
WHY ARE nurses and doctors using their scrubs as street attire?
I CAN'T tell you how many times I have travelled with nurses in the subway.
you CAN'T tell me that for them IT is Halloween EVERY DAY of the year. You see, in Romania the doctors COME to work in normal clothes and they CHANGE in the hospital.
You see[COMMA] Coronella is the perfect mask; [omit:WHERE] you can do whatever you feel as a government and control us some more. You see THERE are revolts everywhere. I think the great awakening HAS started. Coronella's days are numbered... but IT can MUTATE INTO a new STRAIN, so stand by.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Good Evening Ms. Liz, please forgive me, I was in a hurray when I posted this and I made so many mistakes. Thank you for taking care of them:)
Comment from lyenochka
I agree. I never could understand why medical staff wear their scrubs out in the streets! They should get completely freshly dressed before seeing patients! Thanks for sharing.
Comments:
she striped us of our (stripped)
And how the fork does you know (do you)
What the heck are [you] doing
evetime I am seeing (every time?)
suggest:
"When they nurses and doctors are using their scrubs as street attire? Are
change to:
When the nurses and doctors are using their scrubs as street attire, are
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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I agree. I never could understand why medical staff wear their scrubs out in the streets! They should get completely freshly dressed before seeing patients! Thanks for sharing.
Comments:
she striped us of our (stripped)
And how the fork does you know (do you)
What the heck are [you] doing
evetime I am seeing (every time?)
suggest:
"When they nurses and doctors are using their scrubs as street attire? Are
change to:
When the nurses and doctors are using their scrubs as street attire, are
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Hi Hellen, sorry for my eggcorn tonight:) I was in a hurry to posted:)
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No eggcorns just typos. You did fine. I know - I was hurrying to post last night and gave up after trying to write three different things. Lol.
Comment from Leann DS
I appreciate that you used my suggestions for typos. I'm sorry, but I must have missed a couple. Here is what I found this time around:
Paragraph3
*You heard that there are no
*behind this shaking news, or IS IT the government? (Switch these two words)
paragraph 5
custome = costumes
Paragraph6
*doctors are comING to work in normal clothes and they are changING in the
Well done. Blessings and hugs.
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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I appreciate that you used my suggestions for typos. I'm sorry, but I must have missed a couple. Here is what I found this time around:
Paragraph3
*You heard that there are no
*behind this shaking news, or IS IT the government? (Switch these two words)
paragraph 5
custome = costumes
Paragraph6
*doctors are comING to work in normal clothes and they are changING in the
Well done. Blessings and hugs.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Thank you:) the mistakes has been corrected.
