In a Hurry?
a silly poem40 total reviews
Comment from Alli Johnston
Such a funny little poem about something that can be so satisfying to see. I love when people who act like jerks in traffic end up at the butt end of it all. Karma is funny that way
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Such a funny little poem about something that can be so satisfying to see. I love when people who act like jerks in traffic end up at the butt end of it all. Karma is funny that way
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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I am delighted you enjoyed reading this post. Thank you for your insights on the subject of those crazy jerks in traffic.
Comment from Raul1
You had me laughing with oh my repeated lines. I find this poem very funny and hilarious. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. I like your poem. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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You had me laughing with oh my repeated lines. I find this poem very funny and hilarious. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. I like your poem. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Hi Raul1,
Thank you for the gorgeous six stars. I am delighted to know this one tickled your funny bone.
Debi
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You're welcome, my friend!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and very well written silly poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work that went so well with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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This is a very cute and very well written silly poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work that went so well with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Hi Teri,
Thank you for the encouraging comments about the writing. I am delighted you enjoyed reading it.
Debi
Comment from DonandVicki
I like the way that your poem gives the visual truth to life. We see people flash by us in cars, boats, airplanes, but we all end up eventually in the same place. Don
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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I like the way that your poem gives the visual truth to life. We see people flash by us in cars, boats, airplanes, but we all end up eventually in the same place. Don
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Hi Don,
We do all end up in the same place, don't we? Rush all you want, but you still have to wait. Thank you for your insights and the fun review.
Debi
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles w.j.debi you silly poem ---In a Hurry?
I like your repeated comment, My, oh, my, oh, my.
Your free verse poem, the last My, oh, my, oh, my. Tell us readers that you had some one watching you and waited for you gives me the felling you (got a warning or a ticket).
Gert
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Smiles w.j.debi you silly poem ---In a Hurry?
I like your repeated comment, My, oh, my, oh, my.
Your free verse poem, the last My, oh, my, oh, my. Tell us readers that you had some one watching you and waited for you gives me the felling you (got a warning or a ticket).
Gert
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Hi Gert,
I was laughing at the guy in the truck next to me. He kept putting down the pedal only to end up being stopped at the next light. He caused his own stress. Thanks for the commetns.
Debi
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You are most welcome w.j.debi
Gert
Comment from Irish Rain
Ha ha...
I've seen that car!!
It will get one car ahead,
risking lives to do it.
What is the hurry?
I'd rather get there, then not.
I love the humor!!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Ha ha...
I've seen that car!!
It will get one car ahead,
risking lives to do it.
What is the hurry?
I'd rather get there, then not.
I love the humor!!
Blessings...
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Exactly. What is the hurry? Maybe they just like to create their own stress.
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I know, right? And I'm like 'la-de-dah'...teehee.
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LOL
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
a silly poem
In a Hurry?
by w.j.debi
Hello, Debi,
I love your silly poem. I wrote one too today. I think we can all need a little humor just about now. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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a silly poem
In a Hurry?
by w.j.debi
Hello, Debi,
I love your silly poem. I wrote one too today. I think we can all need a little humor just about now. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Hello Gypsy Blue Rose,
Thank you for the encouraging review. Yes, a little humor just now is needed.
Debi
Comment from Sumpta
Awesome, I enjoyed the line that read 'my, oh, my, oh, my,' shaking my head while reading it.
All the best dear. The pictorial display is so perfect for the title.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Awesome, I enjoyed the line that read 'my, oh, my, oh, my,' shaking my head while reading it.
All the best dear. The pictorial display is so perfect for the title.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Hi Sumpta,
I appreciate you stopping by to read and review. With a four star rating, could you please include some details as to what can be improved? That is what is suggested in the guide for ratings.
Thank you so much.
Have a great 2021.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is an awesome poem. It has a Great flow and rhyme scheme. I Love your repeated rhyme my oh my oh my. Very well done. Great photo selection to go with your words. ð???
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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This is an awesome poem. It has a Great flow and rhyme scheme. I Love your repeated rhyme my oh my oh my. Very well done. Great photo selection to go with your words. ð???
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Wow. Thank you so much for the generous six stars and the encouraging comments about the writing.
Debi
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your lighthearted, delightful poem gives a vivid, thorough treatment of something frequent drivers see frequently--the speed demon who builds up speed between stoplights, then ends up waiting--with the slowpokes.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Your lighthearted, delightful poem gives a vivid, thorough treatment of something frequent drivers see frequently--the speed demon who builds up speed between stoplights, then ends up waiting--with the slowpokes.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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It is crazy for those speed demons to hurry so much just to be with the rest of us. Thank you for the understanding comments and the encouraging comments about the writing.
Debi
