In a Hurry?
a silly poem40 total reviews
Comment from dkblack
Oh so true! You've described it perfectly! This is a fun poem and I enjoyed it. Congratulations on the recognized ribbon, and the All Time Best award!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Oh so true! You've described it perfectly! This is a fun poem and I enjoyed it. Congratulations on the recognized ribbon, and the All Time Best award!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Hi Dana,
I hope all is going well. Thank you so much for the six stars and the delightful comments.
Debi
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
If we organize our daily life a bit, we will never be in a hurry. We will remain calm and collected and carry our tasks in a satisfactory way. No hurry. No worry. Thank you for sharing an interesting poem.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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If we organize our daily life a bit, we will never be in a hurry. We will remain calm and collected and carry our tasks in a satisfactory way. No hurry. No worry. Thank you for sharing an interesting poem.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the wise comments. Yes, planning can make life a lot easier.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the title "In a Hurry." You re right: a lot of people are in a hurry. They overtake you, horn you, the worst is to jump red light.
I like the way you say it in your poem, one more light, I turn left... This is a good advice.
I like the poem.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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I like the title "In a Hurry." You re right: a lot of people are in a hurry. They overtake you, horn you, the worst is to jump red light.
I like the way you say it in your poem, one more light, I turn left... This is a good advice.
I like the poem.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the insightful comments on the topic. It sounds like you've experienced these drivers too.
I appreciate you stopping by to read and review.
Debi
Comment from Boogienights
Why are people in such a hurry, when they know that eventually traffic lights will slow them down...this poem is funny because it's true. Thanks for sharing and for the smile. :)
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Why are people in such a hurry, when they know that eventually traffic lights will slow them down...this poem is funny because it's true. Thanks for sharing and for the smile. :)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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I am delighted that you could relate and that you enjoyed the poem. Thank you for the kind comments.
Comment from robyn corum
Debi,
Hey! I know that guy! He is always right beside me at the red light - but I only see him a minute and then he's a bright blur.
For a moment. Like you said, we meet back up at every other red light. I guess he just wants to get that engine hot. Funny stuff!
Note - would you consider increasing the font?
Thanks!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Debi,
Hey! I know that guy! He is always right beside me at the red light - but I only see him a minute and then he's a bright blur.
For a moment. Like you said, we meet back up at every other red light. I guess he just wants to get that engine hot. Funny stuff!
Note - would you consider increasing the font?
Thanks!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Hi Robyn,
I know, that guy sure gets around. I love the comment about the engine.
Thanks for mentioning the font. I thought I chose a larger one, but it doesn't look like what I thought I chose.
Debi
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
ha ha ha My husband and I were out today and a pickup truck came speeding by, changing lanes and almost hit us, them almost hit another car. Your cute poem really hit the nail on the head! It would be better to make up a poem about them than to get mad. lol
Thank you for sharing,
Susan
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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ha ha ha My husband and I were out today and a pickup truck came speeding by, changing lanes and almost hit us, them almost hit another car. Your cute poem really hit the nail on the head! It would be better to make up a poem about them than to get mad. lol
Thank you for sharing,
Susan
Comment Written 14-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Hi Susan,
That sounds like the same pickup truck that came zipping past me. There are too many of them. LOL. Thanks for the fun review.
Debi
Comment from Ann Market
This poem brought a big smile to my face! Certainly a silly poem, but I am quite sure we have all thought this at some point! I enjoyed the well-paced rhythm and flow that the poem held, as well as the fun story. Thanks for sharing! :)
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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This poem brought a big smile to my face! Certainly a silly poem, but I am quite sure we have all thought this at some point! I enjoyed the well-paced rhythm and flow that the poem held, as well as the fun story. Thanks for sharing! :)
Comment Written 14-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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I am happy this poem made you smile. Thank you for the encouraging comments about the writing.
Debi
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
Amen
I like the photo you choose to go with your poem
they are a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first word to the last
people getting no place fast
I all way what is the rush the lights are going to stop you in the end
If not there plenty of room for your grave.
Have a blessed day
Cookie
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Amen
I like the photo you choose to go with your poem
they are a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first word to the last
people getting no place fast
I all way what is the rush the lights are going to stop you in the end
If not there plenty of room for your grave.
Have a blessed day
Cookie
Comment Written 14-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Hi Cookie,
Thank you for the encouraging comments about the poem. I am so glad you liked it.
You have a blessed day too.
Debi
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, a comment on the impatient nature of many drivers, whose excessive speed simply gets them to the next red light ahead of you, so they have to wait longer! Fun and witty.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Yes, a comment on the impatient nature of many drivers, whose excessive speed simply gets them to the next red light ahead of you, so they have to wait longer! Fun and witty.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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I am happy you found this funny and witty. This is based on something that happened to me a few days ago. I am still shaking my head.
Debi
Comment from Ben Colder
Yes, a silly poem but I was thinking how sometimes we get in such a hurry we forget the little things of life. My oh my. Thanks for sharing your little silly poem.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Yes, a silly poem but I was thinking how sometimes we get in such a hurry we forget the little things of life. My oh my. Thanks for sharing your little silly poem.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review, Ben. I am glad you enjoyed the poem.
Debi
