A Pocketful of Coins
Constanza Poem on Childhood9 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
Sounds like you have had a wonderful childhood. Interesting that you got to go to the candy store. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Sounds like you have had a wonderful childhood. Interesting that you got to go to the candy store. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed this fun piece.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Childhood writing prompt contest. Good rhyming scheme. I like the presentation is nice.
It sounds like you had a happy childhood. :)
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Childhood writing prompt contest. Good rhyming scheme. I like the presentation is nice.
It sounds like you had a happy childhood. :)
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A colourful and fun write as children just love their candy and your well rhymed and metered poem is full of these tasty sweet treats, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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A colourful and fun write as children just love their candy and your well rhymed and metered poem is full of these tasty sweet treats, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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So glad you enjoyed this fun piece of nostalgia!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You will be drawing the reader in with this topic. We will all be invited to reflect upon our favorite penny candies. That would be we who were in the era of penny candy. I remember buying 10 pieces for a penny. We could walk out of there with 50 pieces of candy. This was a fun account. I am voting for this one.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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You will be drawing the reader in with this topic. We will all be invited to reflect upon our favorite penny candies. That would be we who were in the era of penny candy. I remember buying 10 pieces for a penny. We could walk out of there with 50 pieces of candy. This was a fun account. I am voting for this one.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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So glad you enjoyed this fun piece of nostalgia!
Comment from Lance S. Loria
I love the style you selected to meet the child prompt. The rhyme was great. The story line was fun and happy. The artwork was complimentary and also bright and joyful. I could imagine the kids running and talking excitedly in the store trying to grab candy. You got my vote. Good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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I love the style you selected to meet the child prompt. The rhyme was great. The story line was fun and happy. The artwork was complimentary and also bright and joyful. I could imagine the kids running and talking excitedly in the store trying to grab candy. You got my vote. Good luck.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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So glad you enjoyed this fun piece of nostalgia! I appreciate your stopping by to read and share your sentiments. And I thank you for the generous rating!
Comment from GC Mcintosh
I found this very nostalgic and heart warming. The Rhyming lines up perfectly and staying within the realm of candies while maintaining the overall shape shows wonderful creativity and prowess.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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I found this very nostalgic and heart warming. The Rhyming lines up perfectly and staying within the realm of candies while maintaining the overall shape shows wonderful creativity and prowess.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed this fun piece!
Comment from zanya
It's not only a beautiful but classic childhood memory - the special treats and sweets to be savoured 'Each Saturday' it's a great title also - soon not to be found anymore 'Pocketful of Change'
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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It's not only a beautiful but classic childhood memory - the special treats and sweets to be savoured 'Each Saturday' it's a great title also - soon not to be found anymore 'Pocketful of Change'
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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So true! The corner store was our favorite place. We used to pick up comic books there as well. Great memories!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Cute little poem, and yup, we all had a sweet tooth as kids, some of us have been denied this innocent joy, because of diabetes:"
Excited, we were never late
All week I dreamt of Mary Janes
and multi-colored candy canes" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Cute little poem, and yup, we all had a sweet tooth as kids, some of us have been denied this innocent joy, because of diabetes:"
Excited, we were never late
All week I dreamt of Mary Janes
and multi-colored candy canes" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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I?m glad you enjoyed this fun piece!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Love that picture of the old time candy store. Great words you have written to illustrate it and tell of your childhood memory. Rhyming is very good and poem flows smoothly.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Love that picture of the old time candy store. Great words you have written to illustrate it and tell of your childhood memory. Rhyming is very good and poem flows smoothly.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed this fun piece.
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You are welcome
