I Am Tired
A loop poem.16 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
I like that you chose the loop form of poetry as it seems to echo the plea of the heart, each day, day after day. Your plaint is understandable for the very base of our humanity is our need for relationships and connectedness. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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I like that you chose the loop form of poetry as it seems to echo the plea of the heart, each day, day after day. Your plaint is understandable for the very base of our humanity is our need for relationships and connectedness. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Alli Johnston
Oh how I'm sure we all agree with you! I love that you use your daughter for inspiration here. Hopefully with the new release of the vaccine we can finally get back to normal within a few more months
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Oh how I'm sure we all agree with you! I love that you use your daughter for inspiration here. Hopefully with the new release of the vaccine we can finally get back to normal within a few more months
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Great statement here. I totally agree. Everyone is tired of Covid; it has invaded our lives like a war and crushed them. The devastation and life loss was worse than any war. I pray that they find the means to stop it, that the vaccines are effective and will be able to stop life loss. That this year will be different, and people can start smiling again.
Thank you for sharing.
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Great statement here. I totally agree. Everyone is tired of Covid; it has invaded our lives like a war and crushed them. The devastation and life loss was worse than any war. I pray that they find the means to stop it, that the vaccines are effective and will be able to stop life loss. That this year will be different, and people can start smiling again.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written loop poem about the effects of covid and social distancing have on us are more devastating than the disease itself. It doesn't seem to going to end very soon unfortunately.
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A very well-written loop poem about the effects of covid and social distancing have on us are more devastating than the disease itself. It doesn't seem to going to end very soon unfortunately.
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Raul1
You do prove a point that people are tired of Covid still being around. I think that the only way to stop it is by controlling it. Excellent work! I like it. Thanks for sharing!
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You do prove a point that people are tired of Covid still being around. I think that the only way to stop it is by controlling it. Excellent work! I like it. Thanks for sharing!
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Lucy de Welles
Hi Patricia,
This is an echo of what we are all thinking. How long can mankind live in a healthy way without hugs? It's not normal. I suppose we will appreciate them all the more when we hug again. Unless we forget how!
Hugs,
Lucy
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Hi Patricia,
This is an echo of what we are all thinking. How long can mankind live in a healthy way without hugs? It's not normal. I suppose we will appreciate them all the more when we hug again. Unless we forget how!
Hugs,
Lucy
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
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