Where Are All The Children
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Judge Jury and Executioner"A vigilante takes down trafficing rings.
13 total reviews
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh dear. I think maybe someone is going to have a few less body parts. =] Another well done chapter. I'm glad the police haven't caught the vigilante. Looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Oh dear. I think maybe someone is going to have a few less body parts. =] Another well done chapter. I'm glad the police haven't caught the vigilante. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for such a fun review. It does look like the wife is going to help him shed some excess weight, lol. If the cops are smart, they'll stand back and let her work.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Mistydawn.
Vigilantes can get better results sometimes because they are not constrained by the law. Often times, the perps are out of jail before the cop signs the arrest report. We have a criminal justice system that gives lots of justice to the criminal and not so much to the victim.
Robert
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Hello Mistydawn.
Vigilantes can get better results sometimes because they are not constrained by the law. Often times, the perps are out of jail before the cop signs the arrest report. We have a criminal justice system that gives lots of justice to the criminal and not so much to the victim.
Robert
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter. It does seem like that sometimes. The cop so much as sneezes wrong and the perp is free. Then they wonder why people take the law into their own hands.
Thank you again for your kind review, all your help, support and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Mia Twysted
It seems more people are getting in on the action. I could feel the rage they both had for the perp getting free. It happens far too often in the real world, as well. I am left wondering what she will do about it and if she will go after him again.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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It seems more people are getting in on the action. I could feel the rage they both had for the perp getting free. It happens far too often in the real world, as well. I am left wondering what she will do about it and if she will go after him again.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter and your encouragement. It does seem that way more times than not. I have a feeling her creative interventions will be taken up a notch or two, lol.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Aha, blood, guts, and vengeance can never come to soon for me. I don't prefer the bad guys to finish last, I choose that they never finish at all. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Aha, blood, guts, and vengeance can never come to soon for me. I don't prefer the bad guys to finish last, I choose that they never finish at all. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Lol. Thank you so much for reading my chapter and for such a marvelous review. If his ex has her way about it, you just might get your wish.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Cindy Warren
Yep, the shit is about to hit the fan. The cops know it, and I hope they move slow enough to let the ladies use those knives. I'm not sure even cutting off the man bits would cure this pig, but it's a start.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Yep, the shit is about to hit the fan. The cops know it, and I hope they move slow enough to let the ladies use those knives. I'm not sure even cutting off the man bits would cure this pig, but it's a start.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for such a fun review and for reading my chapter. I hope you're right the police let the vigilante and her crew handle this one, lol. Probably not since very few are actually cured, 10%.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I think you did as I did , got so excited to finally post that you overlooked some things. I want to tell you because I appreciate when a sharp eye catches stuff for me.
You title Could be written Judge, Jury and "Executioner". Grammarly should have caught this?
Also I think you wanted the word recipient rather than "reciprocal"
"Throwing her fits down" fists Now your story:
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Your metaphors will draw the reader in. The storm metaphor is common but you've used it differently. Why am I not surprised...lol
You use of animation creates a great sensory experience.
What a great surprise to have the daughter appear on the scene...sizzle...then 6 more! And his Ex?? This is genius. Definitely A+
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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I think you did as I did , got so excited to finally post that you overlooked some things. I want to tell you because I appreciate when a sharp eye catches stuff for me.
You title Could be written Judge, Jury and "Executioner". Grammarly should have caught this?
Also I think you wanted the word recipient rather than "reciprocal"
"Throwing her fits down" fists Now your story:
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Your metaphors will draw the reader in. The storm metaphor is common but you've used it differently. Why am I not surprised...lol
You use of animation creates a great sensory experience.
What a great surprise to have the daughter appear on the scene...sizzle...then 6 more! And his Ex?? This is genius. Definitely A+
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for such a marvelous review and for catching my mistakes. Grammarly has been acting weird this week showing I have mistakes when there is none not catching the ones I make. Not sure what's going on.
Thank you again for such a fantastic review, all your help support and friendship. It's always greatly appreciated, take care.
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maybe reinstall Grammarly
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Mistydawn
This chapter in the book Where Are All The Children
Judge Jury and Executioner--
I found it well written, and it was so realistic .
I like how you slowly build up us readers from your previous chapters to this excellent way of how vigilantes actually work and were apprehended.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Hello Mistydawn
This chapter in the book Where Are All The Children
Judge Jury and Executioner--
I found it well written, and it was so realistic .
I like how you slowly build up us readers from your previous chapters to this excellent way of how vigilantes actually work and were apprehended.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I have a feeling the wife is going to make good on her promise.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
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You are most welcome Mistydawn.
Comment from royowen
That seems to be the way of the judicial system, people getting away with "murder" because the system allows technicalities to foul up and allow the perpetrators to get away from the system, to offend again, well done, excellent episode, blessings Roy
Typo : When they keep letting (him) them go?
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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That seems to be the way of the judicial system, people getting away with "murder" because the system allows technicalities to foul up and allow the perpetrators to get away from the system, to offend again, well done, excellent episode, blessings Roy
Typo : When they keep letting (him) them go?
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter and your wonderful encouragement. Either that or they're let out early with a slap on the wrist and don't do it again knowing darn well they will.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me. Take care.
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Most welcome
Comment from forestport12
I definitely see how you could work this as a screenplay and get someone to take a look at it. It has that kind of verbiage/dialogue and rolling pace of action. It's hard for a reader or cinematic eyes to not be glued. Another strong installment.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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I definitely see how you could work this as a screenplay and get someone to take a look at it. It has that kind of verbiage/dialogue and rolling pace of action. It's hard for a reader or cinematic eyes to not be glued. Another strong installment.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for such a marvelous review and suggestion. There is a series similar to it called Big Sky child traffickers without the vigilante, so far at least. We'll see what they decide in season two.
Thank you again for such a kind, uplifting review. Your encouragement, support and friendship always mean the world to me, take care.
Comment from Raul1
Interesting story. I have enjoyed reading it. It is clear and concise. Beautifully written. It is original and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Interesting story. I have enjoyed reading it. It is clear and concise. Beautifully written. It is original and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter, and for your kind comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. The vigilante and her crew are determined to make the city a safer place one whack at a time, lol.
Thank you again for reading my story. Your support means a lot to me, take care.
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You're welcome!