Comment from Father Flaps

Excellent

Hi Mystery Author,
I can hear those tinkles "after the ice storm". You don't even need the picture. Your 5-7-5 is a true haiku IMHO.
You have my vote, but I'm going to offer one suggestion for some alliteration.
After the ice storm
December winds tinkle tunes
On wind chime branches
Good Luck in the contest!
Cheers,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

Like your suggestion. Will incorporate. Thanks for read and comments.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You brought sound to a silent scene here as these look like wind chimes but make no sound, an ambient write and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021

Thank you for your read and feedback. Much appreciated.

Comment from Paul Borders

Excellent

I read through all of the contest entries and pulled the voting lever for Icy Chimes. Seems a lot of other members agree it is the best submission. It appears to be a winner.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021

Thanks for your read and your vote. Much appreciated.

Comment from Alli Johnston

Excellent

This is excellent! Beautiful metaphor and perfect description of a lovely winter, making the best out of a chilly day. I typically despise the cold but this poem gave me a new appreciation. Best of luck in the contest, I think this could win it!

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and for your encouraging comments.

Comment from Jaime Deagle

Excellent

Great job on the poem. I always find the shortest ones the hardest. You were able to convey a complete story with it. Thanks for sharing your writing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and for your encouraging comments.