Comment from Zoe Brown

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading this poem! It truly describes how beautiful the sky is at night. It really does seem like a show made just for you, and the picture goes perfectly with your words. Great poem!

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021

Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

The poem meets the requirement of four lines with rhyme. The picture matches with what the poem says. "My boat slips slowly through the moonlit bay..."

Good writing work, trhankyou for sharing.

Happy 2021

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021

Thank you for this nice review. :)

Comment from Jenny Kartchner

Excellent

I really like your use of rhyming and the flow of your words. The earth has very many beautiful displays for us to enjoy and you have captured one of them.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021

Thanks so much for this great review. :)

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

This four line rhyming poem well meets the writing prompt guidelines. What a fantastic scene you chose to complement the words. I enjoyed reading this one.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021

Thank you for this great review. :)

Comment from HarryT

Excellent

Well you do have a nice, smooth romantic touch. Congrats on a great poem. I love the flow with the s sounds of slip slowly, say and the end rhyme. You paint a wonderful image; the pic is perfect, but really not necessary.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021

Thank you for taking time to read my poem and this nice review. :)

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

I love you clever use of the literary technique of alliteration. The s's become onomatopoetic. The reader can hear the silence as the boat slices through the water. This delightful.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021

Thank you for this wonderful review. :)

Comment from Eddy Fidelis

Excellent

Best read so far
The rhyming makes it sound like a song. Of course it can be sung.
Like the fact that the rhyming wasn't forced, it flows freely. Impressive
Wish you luck in the poll

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

Thank you, that's very kind. I appreciate you taking time to read my poem. :)

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

This piece rolls right off the tongue. Leading you through from beginning to end like you are the one out onthe bay looking up at the moon. You are left feeling rested and relaxed.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This is such a calming and peaceful presentation for the contest. Your picture portrays the same emotions reflected in your writing. Truly lovely writing. Best of luck to you in the upcoming contest.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

Thank you, I appreciate this wonderful review. :)

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Sailing Along
Night Moves
by Boogienights

Hello, my friend,

Excellent entry for the 4 line rhyming poem writing prompt contest. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Good rhyme scheme. I like the visual effects of the boat in the moonlit bay. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

Thank you for this nice review. :)