Robin Redbreast
Bye bye blackbird3 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
It reads like a little tune all its own - what a great offering for the contest here! ;) Thank you so very much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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It reads like a little tune all its own - what a great offering for the contest here! ;) Thank you so very much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thanks for reviewing -Happy New Year zanya
Comment from mermaids
Your five-seven -five form creates a scene of nature the robin does do well in winter. Excellent use of words to describe a beautiful bird. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Your five-seven -five form creates a scene of nature the robin does do well in winter. Excellent use of words to describe a beautiful bird. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This bird likes to sing even in the worse snow storms. It's great poem for the little robin.
The syllable count is correct and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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This bird likes to sing even in the worse snow storms. It's great poem for the little robin.
The syllable count is correct and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Yes thanks for reviewing zanya