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The Speed of Life

A naani contest entry

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Comment from Mark D. R.
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You penned a colorful Naani contest entry. Both illustration and verse are a good combination for FanStory reviewers. Do like your last line especially.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
    Thank you, Mark. I've never heard of this form, so I had to try it!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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What a wonderful thought: that leaves speak in slow motion! :) :) Such a colorful offering for the naani contest here -- best of luck to you at the polls! :)

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
    Thank you, Ms. Roger. I'm glad this struck a chord. I was thinking of a sci-fi story I'd read centuries ago. It may have been Ursula Le Guin "The Word for World is Forest", but maybe not. Anyway, the trees lived for centuries and communicated with each other by changing their leaf colors over countless seasons.