In Dreams
...and since those first hours...10 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
A fine entry for the
Naani Poem writing prompt contest. Good form. The presentation is nice.
I love angels..good topic.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Hello anonymous
A fine entry for the
Naani Poem writing prompt contest. Good form. The presentation is nice.
I love angels..good topic.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review!!
Comment from equestrik
I like this entry for the naani poem writing prompt contest. The chosen illustration is rather mystical and goes well with your write of angels in the mist.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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I like this entry for the naani poem writing prompt contest. The chosen illustration is rather mystical and goes well with your write of angels in the mist.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your review!!
Comment from padumachitta
Hello
Wow, this is a good peom, so provocative and thought provoking...the last two line sknocked me sideways
I can feel fate just vehind my shoulder and an angel on the head of a pin beside me
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Hello
Wow, this is a good peom, so provocative and thought provoking...the last two line sknocked me sideways
I can feel fate just vehind my shoulder and an angel on the head of a pin beside me
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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So glad you found a bit of peacefulness here -- thank you for your review!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a fantastic Naani Poem that speaks about life's fate surrenders in time where man cannot exercise control all the time; well said, well done, thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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This is a fantastic Naani Poem that speaks about life's fate surrenders in time where man cannot exercise control all the time; well said, well done, thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic,
imagery, and rhyme,
like "mists of time."
-I like the concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic,
imagery, and rhyme,
like "mists of time."
-I like the concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review!!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This rolls of the tongue with ease and leaves me in a dreamy state as if I am in a colourful live panto, we need our sleep to recover front each days challenges, I enjoyed the ride here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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This rolls of the tongue with ease and leaves me in a dreamy state as if I am in a colourful live panto, we need our sleep to recover front each days challenges, I enjoyed the ride here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful review!
Comment from Alli Johnston
Beautiful poem, beautiful words, perfect picture choice and color scheme. Within the parameters for the contest, as well. I see this going quite far! Best of luck
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Beautiful poem, beautiful words, perfect picture choice and color scheme. Within the parameters for the contest, as well. I see this going quite far! Best of luck
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love your entry, I am fascinated by Angels and your poem puts them is an enchanted light: 'Solitary angels
throughout the mists of time
whisper fate's surrender
in swirling pantomime" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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I love your entry, I am fascinated by Angels and your poem puts them is an enchanted light: 'Solitary angels
throughout the mists of time
whisper fate's surrender
in swirling pantomime" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review!!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great pairing of image, color scheme, and well-written words, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. Good job on your overall naani.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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This is a great pairing of image, color scheme, and well-written words, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. Good job on your overall naani.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem's a little vague for me to get a clear image in my mind of this, but the words sound nice and soothing and quiet without anger and violence, so that has to be good. I trust angels to do the right thing. Pantomimes can be a bit cruel - I hope I don't end up as the horse's ass.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Your poem's a little vague for me to get a clear image in my mind of this, but the words sound nice and soothing and quiet without anger and violence, so that has to be good. I trust angels to do the right thing. Pantomimes can be a bit cruel - I hope I don't end up as the horse's ass.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review today!!