No Place Like Home
5-7-5 form67 total reviews
Comment from Leann DS
Well, that is a very interesting way to look at eternal life! :-) I liked how you compared it to a mortgage, something most adults can relate to. Very well done. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Well, that is a very interesting way to look at eternal life! :-) I liked how you compared it to a mortgage, something most adults can relate to. Very well done. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Hi Leann, this will be the first mortgage I have ever paid off in full...Thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...and Blessings to you as well...smiling back at you...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this joyous, deeply spiritual poem. Yes, if we belong to Him, our home in Heaven is paid in-full!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this joyous, deeply spiritual poem. Yes, if we belong to Him, our home in Heaven is paid in-full!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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HI Janice, I'm so sorry I'm so late reply back...
so much going on...
Thank you for a wonderful review...I'm so glad you like
it my sweet friend...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. This is funny and I like the humor. Yes. You mortgage is gone so is you. I like the optimism but don't wait until then. Or you can live with it all your life. Paying it off is not the goal but it can free you from its chain. You will live a much free and happy life.
Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Haha. This is funny and I like the humor. Yes. You mortgage is gone so is you. I like the optimism but don't wait until then. Or you can live with it all your life. Paying it off is not the goal but it can free you from its chain. You will live a much free and happy life.
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Hi Liza, Thank you for a wonderful review...I'm so glad you like it...God Bless...and thank you for the good luck...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Ann Market
A clever correlation with "eternal mortgage," and a lovely poem! I liked the use of "paid" likely referring to Christ, too.
Good luck in the contest with this great poem!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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A clever correlation with "eternal mortgage," and a lovely poem! I liked the use of "paid" likely referring to Christ, too.
Good luck in the contest with this great poem!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Hi Ann, thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...
this well be my first paid off mortgage...thank you as well for your good luck...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from royowen
I love this 5/7/5 poem Linda, very clever, oh yes indeed, our soul was mortgaged to the hilt, it was so costly that only the life and blood of Jesus was valuable enough to purchase my hellish abode, brilliantly written Linda, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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I love this 5/7/5 poem Linda, very clever, oh yes indeed, our soul was mortgaged to the hilt, it was so costly that only the life and blood of Jesus was valuable enough to purchase my hellish abode, brilliantly written Linda, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Hi Roy, Thank You my sweet friend for a awesome review...so glad you like it...thank you for the good luck...and blessings and love to you...Linda xxoo
Comment from robyn corum
Linda,
Wow. Well, you've been quiet for a while now (besides the cheerful personalized greeting card you offered lately) and then you smack us in the face with something powerful like this. *smile*
That's just like you. How sweet - and what a great message!
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Linda,
Wow. Well, you've been quiet for a while now (besides the cheerful personalized greeting card you offered lately) and then you smack us in the face with something powerful like this. *smile*
That's just like you. How sweet - and what a great message!
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Hi Robyn, LOL...I wrote the poem a couple weeks back...and kept telling me to post it...so this time...I told me to get on the ball...and post it...
I'm so glad you like it oh sweet one...Thank You for awesome review you...love you...Linda xxoo
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You should listen to your good advice more often!
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I'll work on it...LoL...love xxoo
Comment from lyenochka
Love this, Linda!! And on of my favorite passages is Psalm 90 where the Eternal God is our Home (dwelling place from all generations). No matter where we are, we at home in Him.
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Love this, Linda!! And on of my favorite passages is Psalm 90 where the Eternal God is our Home (dwelling place from all generations). No matter where we are, we at home in Him.
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Hi Helen, Thank You for a wonderful review sweet girl...I love the book of Psalms...smiling...love you...Linda xxoo
