Decorations Away
Memories forever22 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Oh, yes, though we know we'll have to pack everything away after Christmas, we who love to decorate STILL embellish our homes lavishly. Your poem is very descriptive and creative.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Oh, yes, though we know we'll have to pack everything away after Christmas, we who love to decorate STILL embellish our homes lavishly. Your poem is very descriptive and creative.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Janice thank you...
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, descriptive and creative. The poem gives
a positive note to putting decorations away in a joyful way. The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments these
words. Happy New Year!.....Maria
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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The author's words are clear, descriptive and creative. The poem gives
a positive note to putting decorations away in a joyful way. The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments these
words. Happy New Year!.....Maria
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Maria, thanks much, enjoy the New Year!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
The shape chosen for the text of this poem is delightful. I can see that the changes in word colour are to represent the tree decorations, but unfortunately I find that less appealing.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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The shape chosen for the text of this poem is delightful. I can see that the changes in word colour are to represent the tree decorations, but unfortunately I find that less appealing.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We keep our Christmas memories in those little decorations that we dust off every year and present to the world for a few days at Christmas, a colourful write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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We keep our Christmas memories in those little decorations that we dust off every year and present to the world for a few days at Christmas, a colourful write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Wendy G
This is a creative way of writing on a subject which brings you the memories and reflections of a happy Christmas time. You have made it suit the theme of artistic with your format and font colours.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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This is a creative way of writing on a subject which brings you the memories and reflections of a happy Christmas time. You have made it suit the theme of artistic with your format and font colours.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Your kind words are very validating, thank you.
Comment from lyenochka
I had to re-read because my first thought was the kinds of bulbs that you plant. Then I looked at the picture and realized it's the lightbulbs. I liked your colorful shape poem. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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I had to re-read because my first thought was the kinds of bulbs that you plant. Then I looked at the picture and realized it's the lightbulbs. I liked your colorful shape poem. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Smiling back!
Comment from equestrik
Yes, every year we pack away the tree and ornaments along with wonderful new memories from the most recent holiday season. Best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Yes, every year we pack away the tree and ornaments along with wonderful new memories from the most recent holiday season. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review and comments.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Artistic writing prompt contest. I love the presentation... it's creative. The poem is bittersweet...we put ornaments away until next year. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Artistic writing prompt contest. I love the presentation... it's creative. The poem is bittersweet...we put ornaments away until next year. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Yes, but we get do overs year in and year out!
Comment from Boogienights
This is truly artistic the way it is presented, full of color and with a subject I'm familiar with....the taking down of the decorations, a sad time for us. Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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This is truly artistic the way it is presented, full of color and with a subject I'm familiar with....the taking down of the decorations, a sad time for us. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the good wishes.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork,
presentation, and formatting
of your poem.
-I like all of the colors, too.
-You have used the required
lines allowed, have good color
and appearance, and it is creative.
-I like your description of the bulbs.
-You sound like someone who loves flowers.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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-Very nice artwork,
presentation, and formatting
of your poem.
-I like all of the colors, too.
-You have used the required
lines allowed, have good color
and appearance, and it is creative.
-I like your description of the bulbs.
-You sound like someone who loves flowers.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you friend!
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You are welcome, friend!
