Luminous Crystals
a 5-7-524 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
The only stars that I see are the ones that come from someone reading me, Melissa. :) Did you know that glass is now in liquid form? I was reading it on the internet. It's like all the riots happening now, it melts as the people divide. This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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The only stars that I see are the ones that come from someone reading me, Melissa. :) Did you know that glass is now in liquid form? I was reading it on the internet. It's like all the riots happening now, it melts as the people divide. This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Hi Jose. Thank you for your wonderful review. I did not know about the liquid form of glass. Will have to check it out. :)
Melissa
Comment from mermaids
Your use of words captures the image of the night sky, almost like the sky is a painting. "Twinkling shards of glass" is a perfect last line. It accurately describes the night sky which can look like glass. Excellent use of words.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Your use of words captures the image of the night sky, almost like the sky is a painting. "Twinkling shards of glass" is a perfect last line. It accurately describes the night sky which can look like glass. Excellent use of words.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Hello Mermaids. Good morning. I am so happy you liked the 5-7-5 and that you enjoyed it. Thank you.
Melissa
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely 5-7-5 about the stars glistening like shards of broken glass. The night sky is an awesome thing to behold. May your year be blessed by the Creator of the Universe.
Patricia
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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This is a lovely 5-7-5 about the stars glistening like shards of broken glass. The night sky is an awesome thing to behold. May your year be blessed by the Creator of the Universe.
Patricia
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Hello Patricia. I loved reading your review. The blessing you bestow is readily received and sent back to you too. Our Lord creates awesome majesty and allows us to see it. Thank you!
Melissa
Comment from Boogienights
Wow! I really love the image that this brought to my mind. There is something about the evening sky, it's so beautiful. Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Wow! I really love the image that this brought to my mind. There is something about the evening sky, it's so beautiful. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your lovely comments!!
Melissa
Comment from robyn corum
Melissa,
You have parked on one of the crazy issues I often have as a prose writer - finding a new and different way to describe the night sky.
The velvet is not new, but still beautiful, and the twinkly shards of crystal work wonderfully to provide a dramatic image. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Melissa,
You have parked on one of the crazy issues I often have as a prose writer - finding a new and different way to describe the night sky.
The velvet is not new, but still beautiful, and the twinkly shards of crystal work wonderfully to provide a dramatic image. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you Robyn. I am delighted you like the descriptive phrases in this one. I love the thought of a blue velvet sky. :). Hugs.
Melissa
Comment from Mistydawn
What a wonderful description about the starry night. I never thought about it like that before, but your right it does look like that. That's a great thing about you poet's you make us see things in a different way. Your poem is well-written, interesting and your artwork is gorgeous.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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What a wonderful description about the starry night. I never thought about it like that before, but your right it does look like that. That's a great thing about you poet's you make us see things in a different way. Your poem is well-written, interesting and your artwork is gorgeous.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Hey Misty. Thank you. I love the thought of a blue velvet midnight sky... but, do not discount your prose writing... you keep us poets grounded with sensible and logical points of view. :).
Melissa
Comment from zanya
This 5-7-5 is a heavenly feast for the senses especially the visual senses - something to reflect upon as we make our way into the brand new year and better times !
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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This 5-7-5 is a heavenly feast for the senses especially the visual senses - something to reflect upon as we make our way into the brand new year and better times !
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Hi Zanya. Thanks so much for your lovely review.
Melissa
Comment from Pantygynt
You are definitely getting some mileage out of this picture of what I believe is moonrise seen from space. Lol. The 5-7-5 is a succinct and rather lovely description of it.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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You are definitely getting some mileage out of this picture of what I believe is moonrise seen from space. Lol. The 5-7-5 is a succinct and rather lovely description of it.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Hey Jim. I am glad you like the photo and the 5-7-5... thanks so much. See you soon.
Melissa
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the first sign of light in the morning skies appearing like luminous crystals that lights up the darkened sky to announce a new day.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the first sign of light in the morning skies appearing like luminous crystals that lights up the darkened sky to announce a new day.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you Sandra!
MELISSA
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine 5-7-5 presenting a sparkle of light reflected on broken crystal here as it bursts across the skies, few words about a glittering scene, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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A fine 5-7-5 presenting a sparkle of light reflected on broken crystal here as it bursts across the skies, few words about a glittering scene, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thanks so much Dolly!! Glad you liked it.
Melissa