The Temptress
A contest entry48 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
This is a good and fun write with a good message. All those temptresses best beware! I like the complete presentation with your clever picture along with your creative use of the required words.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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This is a good and fun write with a good message. All those temptresses best beware! I like the complete presentation with your clever picture along with your creative use of the required words.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you! Happy New Year. :)
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
I really enjoyed this, a great little story that I could picture unfolding. I read it twice and chuckled a bit, very well done. Best of luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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I really enjoyed this, a great little story that I could picture unfolding. I read it twice and chuckled a bit, very well done. Best of luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you! I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem. And thank you for the best of luck wishes. Have a lovely 2021. :)
Comment from Barry Childs
Oh well, I just wanted to say, 'fantastic' but Fanstory make me write more so here goes. This is a clever and well thought out poem using the words you had to and putting them seamlessly into a brilliant little poem that tells a beautiful story. Perfect rhyme and rhythm to boot.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Oh well, I just wanted to say, 'fantastic' but Fanstory make me write more so here goes. This is a clever and well thought out poem using the words you had to and putting them seamlessly into a brilliant little poem that tells a beautiful story. Perfect rhyme and rhythm to boot.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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I absolutely love your picture! Lol. Thank you so much for the six stars, and the lovely review. I'm delighted you enjoyed my poem. Have lovely New Year. :)
Comment from Earl Corp
This could have been a Tell a Story in a Poem contest entry as well. I like how you bolder the required words. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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This could have been a Tell a Story in a Poem contest entry as well. I like how you bolder the required words. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Earl, that is so nice of you to say that. Happy New Year, to you, too. :)
Comment from Wendy G
I very much enjoyed this humorous poem, with its originality despite having to incorporate the set words. It is well written and flows very smoothly. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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I very much enjoyed this humorous poem, with its originality despite having to incorporate the set words. It is well written and flows very smoothly. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Wendy! Happy New Year! :))
Comment from victor 66
This is a fascinating story told in a poetic format with good rhyme and good rhythm. It was fun to read. My only questiois when do these ladies hold her husbands accountable for their actions concerning this lady? Best wishes.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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This is a fascinating story told in a poetic format with good rhyme and good rhythm. It was fun to read. My only questiois when do these ladies hold her husbands accountable for their actions concerning this lady? Best wishes.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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LOL, Wives are very subtle about such things, we make sure their eyes don't wander again! Thank you, Victor, for reading my poem. Happy New Year!
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Susan Larson
What an accomplishment! What an imagination! What a command of the language! What more can I say? This is a very entertaining poem and very entertaining story.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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What an accomplishment! What an imagination! What a command of the language! What more can I say? This is a very entertaining poem and very entertaining story.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Aw, thank you, Susan! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Have a lovely New Year. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The Temptress
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the
Write a poem using these words... writing contest.
I know a temptress that I once hated but I would not kill her. She ruined my marriage. She was a married coworker my ex-husband was infatuated with. As soon as my ex dividend me she ended the relationship with my ex. Karma is a bitch.
Now it's all water under the bridge. It wasn't about me.
Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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The Temptress
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the
Write a poem using these words... writing contest.
I know a temptress that I once hated but I would not kill her. She ruined my marriage. She was a married coworker my ex-husband was infatuated with. As soon as my ex dividend me she ended the relationship with my ex. Karma is a bitch.
Now it's all water under the bridge. It wasn't about me.
Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Men are so fickle, they don't realise some women only like the excitement of being with a married man, they aren't wanting anything serious. I'm sorry this happened to you. He was the loser.
Thank you for reading my poem, Gypsy Blue Rose. Have a really good 2021. xx
Comment from alexisleech
I love it! You are so clever, Sandra. Just as well there are a few witches left in this world to sort out the sexy ladies trying to snare other women's erring husbands. Good luck in the contest, I'm sure you have a winner here!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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I love it! You are so clever, Sandra. Just as well there are a few witches left in this world to sort out the sexy ladies trying to snare other women's erring husbands. Good luck in the contest, I'm sure you have a winner here!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much, Alexis. I'm pleased you enjoyed this poem. Thank you for the good luck wishes. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem with the prescribed words. Every woman will be upset with a temptress who try to steal everyone's husband's attention. The temptresses should be worried.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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A very well-written poem with the prescribed words. Every woman will be upset with a temptress who try to steal everyone's husband's attention. The temptresses should be worried.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Sandra! Happy New Year. :)
