Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Sandra,
This is a well written story about jealousy and revenge. Well it seems the potions worked and now the temptress has her own husband and has to watch out for women who are temptresses like she used to be.
You used the words well.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Hi Joan, thank you so much. I'm glad you liked this one. I don't know how my mind came up with it! Lol. Warm hugs, my friend, and you stay safe and well, too. :)) Sandraxxx

reply by dragonpoet on 06-Feb-2021

You are most kindly welcome, Sandra.
Joan

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Sandra, sometimes a girls just got to have fun...

CONGRATULATIONS my amazing friend on a great win you...
because it was a contest poem I didn't get it in my PM...
they really should post them after the contest...I'm so sorry I missed it...

I love your poem my sweet friend...and love the picture of me...many a moon...very well written you...so much love...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021

Aw, thank you, my sweet friend. It was a surprise win, but I was really happy about it. You mean you didn't mind me putting your picture at the top?! LOL, LOL, LOL!!!! Love you muchly, my friend. :)) Sandra xxxxx

reply by l.raven on 15-Jan-2021

as long as I look like that...put that baby up there...LOL...your so welcome you...alwaysssss...much love to you...smiling back at you...xxoo

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

This is a delightful poem. I wish I had a six left to give you. It's no wonder you won the contest with this well-told tale. It is clever. I'm glad the wives took all the precautions needed and got the lady hitched.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021

Aw, thank you, Debi, I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading my poem. It was such fun to write. I couldn't let the Temptress get away with it, could I?? LOL. Warm hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from DeboraDyess

Excellent

hahahahahaha! Love it!
YOu did a great job on this, Sandra. I came over to look for a new chapter to Betrayed. Glad I saw this, too! I haven't read the other contest pieces, but this is a winner for me. :)
Blessings,
Debs

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021

Aw thank you. I won! LOL. You have part 15 to read, so don't miss it, or you'll get lost! Thanks dear friend. I'm glad you liked my poem. Warm hugs. xxx

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Sandra, how come I was never advised about this poem? It's wonderful and no wonder it won. I'm so pleased for you! She a real seductive woman and knows what she's doing. A hug, Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021

Hi Ulla, no, you wouldn't have got it in your messages, it was a blind contest. I'm amazed it won, but very happy about it! Lol. Thanks for the lovely review, my friend. Stay safe! Warm hugs back. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from amada

Excellent

"Her perfume filled the air..." This is just one of many wise and smart lines to describe a lady of solicituos means. It choke me up, many times. I used to know one of those ladies.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021

Thank you for reading, Amada. I hope it hasn't upset you. Warm hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from greyson ernst

Excellent

this is really good im bummed out that i missed it but i love this and congrats well deserved and as always keep writing and stay safe


sincerely Greyson Ernst

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021

Thank you, Greyson Ernst, I really appreciate your lovely comments. Especially being 'bummed out' for missing it! lol!! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021

Comment from Monica Chaddick

Exceptional

Congratulations on your first place win, as well as on your work being recognized and being named one of the all time best. This was a delightfully charming poem, and the artwork accompanying it was perfect. Best of luck in all of your future writing endeavors.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021

Thank you so very much, Monica, for your lovely review, the golden stars, and the congrats!! That is so kind of you. When I saw your name, I had to smile, one of my main characters in my novel is Monica, she's a lovely lady, too. :)) Happy New Year, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from Justin Chopin

Excellent

A very clever and creative story. Enjoyed this piece the rhythms and rhymes you utilized to tell this story of the seductress, the witch and the women worked very well for your piece. Glad she got hitched. Great work Sandra.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021

Thank you so much, Justin. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Happy New Year! :)) Sandra xxx

reply by Justin Chopin on 08-Jan-2021

You're welcome. Happy New Year to you too Sandra.

Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel

Excellent

ha ha ha! This is great! You used the required words so creatively and cleverly, that they seamlessly were integrated into the meaning of the poem. I especially liked the creative way you worked "pipe" into the poem.
Thank you for sharing and congratulations on your win!
Susan

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021

Thank you for the congrats, Susan! I had fun writing this one. And, thank you for the lovely review, I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading it. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx