Heart Crafted Poems -2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Grandmas Game Day"Musings of an old man -2021
14 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL -- oh, yeah, that sounds just like my spunky lil' grandmother would have been in all this nonsense -- great offering and use of the unusual meter! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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LOL -- oh, yeah, that sounds just like my spunky lil' grandmother would have been in all this nonsense -- great offering and use of the unusual meter! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Smiling back!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Write a Poem in Trochaic Meter contest.
Over 350,000 people died of covid so we all have to put on masks... it's not much to ask.
The rhythm of your trochaic meter falls into the unstressed beat unlike iambic...well done.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Write a Poem in Trochaic Meter contest.
Over 350,000 people died of covid so we all have to put on masks... it's not much to ask.
The rhythm of your trochaic meter falls into the unstressed beat unlike iambic...well done.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Gypsy Rose, so absolutely correct a simple act of human kindness does save lives.....I just in the middle of a great novel the Orphan Collector about the trials of the Spanish flu in Philadelphia and then terrible losses and conditions back then...ugh
Comment from Boogienights
This is really funny, I like how grandma threw them all out in the end. Burnt pie though, brings me to tears. This is a great contest entry, good luck to you. :)
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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This is really funny, I like how grandma threw them all out in the end. Burnt pie though, brings me to tears. This is a great contest entry, good luck to you. :)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I like the photo you choose to go with your poem, They are a perfect match. You captured my attention from the first line to the last
I had to chuckle when grandma threw everyone out the house
Even though it was sad but, safety comes first
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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I like the photo you choose to go with your poem, They are a perfect match. You captured my attention from the first line to the last
I had to chuckle when grandma threw everyone out the house
Even though it was sad but, safety comes first
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Thank you! I am honored by your six-star review!
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Your very welcome, you earned it
Cookie
Comment from equestrik
I enjoyed this write and the picture you chose. Poor Grandma has had it! I guess the moral of the story is to not mess with Grandma's big day of performing her skills!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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I enjoyed this write and the picture you chose. Poor Grandma has had it! I guess the moral of the story is to not mess with Grandma's big day of performing her skills!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Smiles!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem in trochaic meter about grandma throwing het guests out with their masks to prevent the spread of Covid and the pumpkin pie was tossed out too because it was burnt.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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A very well-written poem in trochaic meter about grandma throwing het guests out with their masks to prevent the spread of Covid and the pumpkin pie was tossed out too because it was burnt.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Sandra, thanks much!
Comment from Jaime Deagle
A great humorous poem. I chuckled aloud at a few lines. Well done and thanks for a great read and a smile in the midst of these trying times. thanks for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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A great humorous poem. I chuckled aloud at a few lines. Well done and thanks for a great read and a smile in the midst of these trying times. thanks for sharing your work.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
An excellent entry in this trochaic meter, although probably better in seven syllable lines for consistency, the theme and the writing are very good, good look with this contest entry, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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An excellent entry in this trochaic meter, although probably better in seven syllable lines for consistency, the theme and the writing are very good, good look with this contest entry, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Thanks Roy... good practice
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Bless you
Comment from Taurus the Elder
Very good. Grandmas got game. I'm not familiar with this style but the story is solid and has a strong ending. Supported well by the art work. Great job, wishing you luck in the contest and the coming year.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Very good. Grandmas got game. I'm not familiar with this style but the story is solid and has a strong ending. Supported well by the art work. Great job, wishing you luck in the contest and the coming year.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from country ranch writer
Horsy for Grandma getting rid of all the racket going on around her in her kitchen. After getting fed up with the ruckus she kicked them out stock and barrel out the back door. Her burnt pie was last straw!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Horsy for Grandma getting rid of all the racket going on around her in her kitchen. After getting fed up with the ruckus she kicked them out stock and barrel out the back door. Her burnt pie was last straw!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Smiles back to you, thanks for the sixer!
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Smiles