A Year of Renewal
Make 2021 a...18 total reviews
Comment from greyson ernst
this is really really good i love it good luck in my contest nice picture to and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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this is really really good i love it good luck in my contest nice picture to and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Thanks so much, I like your entry too! Have a wonderful night. :)
Comment from country ranch writer
Sounds like you have it all fingered out fit beginning the start of the NewYear. I don't do resoulations because I don't make promises I don't keep.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Sounds like you have it all fingered out fit beginning the start of the NewYear. I don't do resoulations because I don't make promises I don't keep.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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I don't really call them resolutions...they are more like goals I set for myself. I don't beat myself up if it doesn't happen. :) Thanks so much for reading my poem.
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Comment from Sugarray77
Hello there! I so enjoyed reading your upbeat and fun poem as you welcomed in the New Year with new expectations. Great job this fine verse with the use of good rhymes and presentation. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Hello there! I so enjoyed reading your upbeat and fun poem as you welcomed in the New Year with new expectations. Great job this fine verse with the use of good rhymes and presentation. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Thank you, I think this year will be great. All the best to you and your family in the coming year. :)
Comment from LisaMay
Hahaha.... I love your exuberant positivity: "all of these things don't seem that hard to do"... especially after the difficulties of 2020. I like your combination of the serious with the humorous: "2020, we bid you adieu,
don't let the door hit you on the way out."
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Hahaha.... I love your exuberant positivity: "all of these things don't seem that hard to do"... especially after the difficulties of 2020. I like your combination of the serious with the humorous: "2020, we bid you adieu,
don't let the door hit you on the way out."
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Thank you for such a nice review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from moonsunrise
What a great poem read. I absolutely love the positive, cheerful, hopeful image you selected.
Yes, 2021 is going to be a much better year.
Good riddins to 2020. Let us all flourish now in peace and positivity.
Happy New Year. Kind regards. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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What a great poem read. I absolutely love the positive, cheerful, hopeful image you selected.
Yes, 2021 is going to be a much better year.
Good riddins to 2020. Let us all flourish now in peace and positivity.
Happy New Year. Kind regards. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Thanks so much...I like your positive attitude. We all need to hope for the best. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You sound so positive about the New Year here that I feel like having a party to celebrate, your faith in this year has filled me with enthusiasm, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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You sound so positive about the New Year here that I feel like having a party to celebrate, your faith in this year has filled me with enthusiasm, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem, I'm always glad to hear from you. :)
Comment from karenina
Ah, I wish I had your optimism. We are already way behind schedule on vaccinations. At this rate it would take a decade to vaccinate enough people to achieve herd immunity. It's been a long hard year behind us and it's looking like 2021 will be a dark journey well before any light at the tunnel. The world needs optimists like you!--Karenina
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Ah, I wish I had your optimism. We are already way behind schedule on vaccinations. At this rate it would take a decade to vaccinate enough people to achieve herd immunity. It's been a long hard year behind us and it's looking like 2021 will be a dark journey well before any light at the tunnel. The world needs optimists like you!--Karenina
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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If I don't try to be optimistic, I'll go crazy..lol. seriously though, I think this will be a great year....things can't get any worse can they? Thanks again.:)
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I'm not going to tempt the fates! We all had such grand plans for the new decade and look how THAT turned out!--Karenina
Comment from Michele Harber
I love the new year's excitement and anticipation reflected, and that you're facing it honestly ("Though Covid still lingers and masks are a must ...") and hopefully ("I plan on winning the lottery"). This is a very uplifting, feel-good kind of poem, with an important message at the end.
My only question is why you chose an inconsistent rhyme pattern, sometimes doing abab and sometimes abcb. Otherwise, I enjoyed this very much. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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I love the new year's excitement and anticipation reflected, and that you're facing it honestly ("Though Covid still lingers and masks are a must ...") and hopefully ("I plan on winning the lottery"). This is a very uplifting, feel-good kind of poem, with an important message at the end.
My only question is why you chose an inconsistent rhyme pattern, sometimes doing abab and sometimes abcb. Otherwise, I enjoyed this very much. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Thank you for reading. I didn't realize I was doing that, but thanks to your good advice I changed it, let me know what you think? Thanks again. :)
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You're very welcome. I'm so glad I was able to help. The changes you made are excellent. I'm truly impressed.
