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Mirror Poem Contest Entry4 total reviews
Comment from kmoss
This is a creative approach to a mirror contest. Talking about the dirty mirror. It's funny because I truly believed that I was not the one that left toothpaste splashes and dots on the mirror, and then we got our own sinks and separate parts of the mirror. I am the slob that was making that mess! Good poem!
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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This is a creative approach to a mirror contest. Talking about the dirty mirror. It's funny because I truly believed that I was not the one that left toothpaste splashes and dots on the mirror, and then we got our own sinks and separate parts of the mirror. I am the slob that was making that mess! Good poem!
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Kmoss. Yeah, most of us have a mirror that could use some cleaning. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked my take on the contest.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever well worded and metered poem with a promise of a clean up in sight! You made me smile here and your poem is a dream to read and you won my vote here, a fine write and it deserves a six, but I don't have one to give, so you have my vote instead, I hope you win, a quality write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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This is a clever well worded and metered poem with a promise of a clean up in sight! You made me smile here and your poem is a dream to read and you won my vote here, a fine write and it deserves a six, but I don't have one to give, so you have my vote instead, I hope you win, a quality write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and support, Dolly. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and big six offer. I'm glad you liked my silly little take on the contest. Have a wonderful rest of your weekend.
Comment from RodG
This poem made me groan because you vividly described what I see whenever I look into my bathroom mirror. The Speaker does not hesitate to take action and takes pride in the result. The cadence is smooth throughout and I like your ABCB rhyme scheme. Rod
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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This poem made me groan because you vividly described what I see whenever I look into my bathroom mirror. The Speaker does not hesitate to take action and takes pride in the result. The cadence is smooth throughout and I like your ABCB rhyme scheme. Rod
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Rod. Yes, many of our bathroom mirrors are the same way. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This sounds familiar. But at least you took the time to clean it. Excellent job.
I like the ending paragraph: " Windex works wonders. My mirror was free. I proudly looked up and then smiled at me." I like a clean mirror.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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This sounds familiar. But at least you took the time to clean it. Excellent job.
I like the ending paragraph: " Windex works wonders. My mirror was free. I proudly looked up and then smiled at me." I like a clean mirror.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Good. I really appreciate the stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
