Introduction To My Mind
Wandering thoughts caught in a brain burp10 total reviews
Comment from Poetic Friend
Thank you for the introduction to your mind. I have thought as such intermittently. We are our greatest critics. However, reflection encourages our growth.
I love the rhyme usage in the entirety of the poem, which works effectively. This is not an easy task.
Be safe and blessed.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the introduction to your mind. I have thought as such intermittently. We are our greatest critics. However, reflection encourages our growth.
I love the rhyme usage in the entirety of the poem, which works effectively. This is not an easy task.
Be safe and blessed.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Erin Reynolds
Beautiful artwork (caused me to click on your poem)! I really love how your poem takes me through the too familiar internal back-and-forth. I also enjoyed your choice of not using punctuation; it reflects that unstoppable deluge of thought.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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Beautiful artwork (caused me to click on your poem)! I really love how your poem takes me through the too familiar internal back-and-forth. I also enjoyed your choice of not using punctuation; it reflects that unstoppable deluge of thought.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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I really appreciate you stopping in!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about thoughts coming to mind randomly and inspection if your mind to realize there us nothing wrong with you it is the demon who manipulate your thoughts that should be exorcised.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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A very well-written poem about thoughts coming to mind randomly and inspection if your mind to realize there us nothing wrong with you it is the demon who manipulate your thoughts that should be exorcised.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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Amen! Thanks!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Brilliant rhyming--wry humor amidst the sober introspection. Clever title.
No apology needed for lack of punctuation--superfluous unless needed for clarity in the case of mid-line break. I bemoan the recent trend to punctuate poetry like prose.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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Brilliant rhyming--wry humor amidst the sober introspection. Clever title.
No apology needed for lack of punctuation--superfluous unless needed for clarity in the case of mid-line break. I bemoan the recent trend to punctuate poetry like prose.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We are our own worst enemy at time as we can be very critical of ourselves and it is good to recognise that we have flaws, but we also have many good points which must be recognised too, a poignant well rhymed poem, I enjoyed all the feminine endings, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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We are our own worst enemy at time as we can be very critical of ourselves and it is good to recognise that we have flaws, but we also have many good points which must be recognised too, a poignant well rhymed poem, I enjoyed all the feminine endings, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from pome lover
Brain burp - what an expression. Seems to be geared mostly toward poets.
It's so easy to get carried away writing poetry. Prose, too, I suppose, but not as much - not as inventive, and by that I mean RHYME that makes sense.
Perfection is a taller order. One worthy of reflection and criticism.
Your poem, however, is clever and funny and self critical. Wandering Thoughts are usually cathartic - more fun for the author than the reader, I think. At any rate, good job.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
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Brain burp - what an expression. Seems to be geared mostly toward poets.
It's so easy to get carried away writing poetry. Prose, too, I suppose, but not as much - not as inventive, and by that I mean RHYME that makes sense.
Perfection is a taller order. One worthy of reflection and criticism.
Your poem, however, is clever and funny and self critical. Wandering Thoughts are usually cathartic - more fun for the author than the reader, I think. At any rate, good job.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
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I surely appreciate your kind review. I tend yo think outside the box. Haha
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This poem encourages reflection and introspection. I totally agree with it. Through introspection, we can improve our self; live a better life and even have a better career.
Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
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This poem encourages reflection and introspection. I totally agree with it. Through introspection, we can improve our self; live a better life and even have a better career.
Well done.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
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And yet another. ...
Double thanks
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This poem encourages reflection and introspection. I totally agree with it. Through introspection, we can improve our self; live a better life and even have a better career.
Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
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This poem encourages reflection and introspection. I totally agree with it. Through introspection, we can improve our self; live a better life and even have a better career.
Well done.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
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Somehow I got two reviews from you. How does that happen?
Comment from DonandVicki
The poem is as stunning as the artwork that you created. I enjoyed the meter and rhyme. The poem moves smoothly along and trips off the tongue. Don and Vicki
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
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The poem is as stunning as the artwork that you created. I enjoyed the meter and rhyme. The poem moves smoothly along and trips off the tongue. Don and Vicki
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
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Thanks! I?m so happy you enjoyed it!
Comment from kmoss
This is an excellent poem! I love the strong rhymes. It flows so freely. I also learned something today. I had to Google Confucian. It may be a helpful note to add, unless I'm the only one that didn't know about it. The artwork is gorgeous also.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
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This is an excellent poem! I love the strong rhymes. It flows so freely. I also learned something today. I had to Google Confucian. It may be a helpful note to add, unless I'm the only one that didn't know about it. The artwork is gorgeous also.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
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Really? You had to Google that? I must be old.
Thank you for the fab review!
Happy new year!
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Yes I did. Don?t take it personal, it?s probably me, living in my bubble. Lol