Where Are All The Children
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Creative Intervention"A vigilante takes down trafficing rings.
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Comment from forestport12
Your writing impresses me. You dress with a good balance of descriptions and spike it with some taut or tight dialogue. You paint a vivid picture too esp. with that shocking of someone's private. Interesting plot that makes the reader want more.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Your writing impresses me. You dress with a good balance of descriptions and spike it with some taut or tight dialogue. You paint a vivid picture too esp. with that shocking of someone's private. Interesting plot that makes the reader want more.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for such a warm, encouraging review. I glad you liked my negative intervention. I was afraid the image might make my male readers a little uncomfortable.
Thank you again for such a kind review. All your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a well written horror story. Is there a reason you picked Atlanta for this to take place. I'll be some terrible things goes on in that city. These cops to feel any too sympathetic toward the victim. Men who do this sort of thing, deserve whatever they get. Good writing.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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This is a well written horror story. Is there a reason you picked Atlanta for this to take place. I'll be some terrible things goes on in that city. These cops to feel any too sympathetic toward the victim. Men who do this sort of thing, deserve whatever they get. Good writing.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for such a kind review. You're right, they do deserve what they get and some. I picked Atlanta because it was listed extremely high on the most dangerous city's in the US.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Ric Myworld
We will never know just how often these things happen or how many bodies of innocent children and even adults are never found, and what they had to go through. It's unimaginable that human being could have such thought or carry out such dastardly deeds. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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We will never know just how often these things happen or how many bodies of innocent children and even adults are never found, and what they had to go through. It's unimaginable that human being could have such thought or carry out such dastardly deeds. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for such a warm review. You're right, we don't know how many actual victims there are. They estimate three million, but I'm sure it's nearly double that. The horror they face is unimaginable so is the recovery after. In reality, they never truly recover.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Misty, I can hardly believe what I'm reading here. How sick can people get. I wish they could turn the voltage up and get rid of him once and for all. And now two small kids are found dead in his bed. Deare me. Very well written. Ulla :)))
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Hi Misty, I can hardly believe what I'm reading here. How sick can people get. I wish they could turn the voltage up and get rid of him once and for all. And now two small kids are found dead in his bed. Deare me. Very well written. Ulla :)))
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for such a fantastic review. You're not the only one that wants him to become a crispy critter. I only hope the inmates will finish him off, slowly, showing no mercy. Two are gone, but more were saved.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This chapter of the fiction begins with a catchy introduction, then speaks about the missionary contributory creative intervention in an appropriate and positive taletelling, fostered with progressive plot development, ends with a formal curious premising ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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This chapter of the fiction begins with a catchy introduction, then speaks about the missionary contributory creative intervention in an appropriate and positive taletelling, fostered with progressive plot development, ends with a formal curious premising ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for your positive review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I figure it's time for the vigilante to turn up the heat, give them what they deserve.
Thank you again for all your support. It means the world to me. Take care.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Somehow, I've missed some chapters, I'll go back and read them to catch up. But even so, it was still easy to slip in here and wish I could go and turn the voltage up! Those creeps make me sick. I really enjoyed this part, it was nice knowing he was in pain. But, now we have to dead children in his bed! That cooks his goose!! Well done, Misty. xxx
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Somehow, I've missed some chapters, I'll go back and read them to catch up. But even so, it was still easy to slip in here and wish I could go and turn the voltage up! Those creeps make me sick. I really enjoyed this part, it was nice knowing he was in pain. But, now we have to dead children in his bed! That cooks his goose!! Well done, Misty. xxx
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for such a warm review. I wish I could too. I figure a little negative reinforcement might do some good. I only wish they didn't find him so soon, lol. I'm just hoping the other inmates will finish the job.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means so much to me, take care.
