Cabin in the Forest
Is there such a thing as a curse?5 total reviews
Comment from Ben B.
You may want to work on that last line there. You can either have the story in first person or in third person. You sort of shattered the fourth wall on me there.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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You may want to work on that last line there. You can either have the story in first person or in third person. You sort of shattered the fourth wall on me there.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thanks for the advice. I will recheck and try to correct.
Comment from zanya
A tale filled with intrigue and adventure leaving the reader with lots to ponder - A suitable one for teens as per the competition prompt - good description of the forest -excellent dialogue & it really carries the story
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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A tale filled with intrigue and adventure leaving the reader with lots to ponder - A suitable one for teens as per the competition prompt - good description of the forest -excellent dialogue & it really carries the story
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your read, review and encouraging comments.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Excellent! I'm 50 years past teenage and I was captivated! Kudos for managing to broaden the appeal. I just saw a reenactment three days ago--a guy in Civil War Era wanted to avoid having to fight for "his" side rubbed himself with poison ivy to simulate small pox! (It worked.)
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Excellent! I'm 50 years past teenage and I was captivated! Kudos for managing to broaden the appeal. I just saw a reenactment three days ago--a guy in Civil War Era wanted to avoid having to fight for "his" side rubbed himself with poison ivy to simulate small pox! (It worked.)
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thanks for the read and review. Your comments are appreciated.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an appropriate story for teens. It has just the right amount of suspense, and two believable characters. Since they are just friends, the issue of a sex scene can be avoided.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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This is an appropriate story for teens. It has just the right amount of suspense, and two believable characters. Since they are just friends, the issue of a sex scene can be avoided.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thanks for the read and review. Your comments are appreciated.
Comment from Pantygynt
When I was teaching in the 1970s and early eighties this idea of of easy reading with more mature content first started in Britain. This fits the bill. The vocabulary is simple without being 'childish and the interest level should grab the age group for which it is intended. It is an interesting tale and I hope it does well in the contest.
This is a genre that should have commercial promis as I am sure there is still a shortage of suitable material.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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When I was teaching in the 1970s and early eighties this idea of of easy reading with more mature content first started in Britain. This fits the bill. The vocabulary is simple without being 'childish and the interest level should grab the age group for which it is intended. It is an interesting tale and I hope it does well in the contest.
This is a genre that should have commercial promis as I am sure there is still a shortage of suitable material.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the read and review. Your comments are appreciated.
