My Life with You
In Your name28 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
This is a sweet presentation for the writing prompt to write a letter to god. I think you chose a good picture to go with your writing. Best of luck to you.
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This is a sweet presentation for the writing prompt to write a letter to god. I think you chose a good picture to go with your writing. Best of luck to you.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
Comment from sammielwf
My Life With You-
It is a heartfelt prayer of love and faith to the God who has held your hand and your heart all through your life.
The individual circumstances you shared within your poem- show the steadfastness of a God that is always there....A god that always hears and answers.
We may not always understand the answer we are given- it may take a world full of pain and hurt- before we do... But eventually everything makes sense and we realize once again that He has never left our side. That the greatest Healer of all times is OUR healer.
I am glad that your relationship with your dad was made better and stronger and more loving before he passed. God knew your heart and God knew your father's too.
I believe that we will see our loved ones again-in the meantime it is up to use to follow God's guidance the best we can.. He will always love us- through it all.
Sammielwf
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My Life With You-
It is a heartfelt prayer of love and faith to the God who has held your hand and your heart all through your life.
The individual circumstances you shared within your poem- show the steadfastness of a God that is always there....A god that always hears and answers.
We may not always understand the answer we are given- it may take a world full of pain and hurt- before we do... But eventually everything makes sense and we realize once again that He has never left our side. That the greatest Healer of all times is OUR healer.
I am glad that your relationship with your dad was made better and stronger and more loving before he passed. God knew your heart and God knew your father's too.
I believe that we will see our loved ones again-in the meantime it is up to use to follow God's guidance the best we can.. He will always love us- through it all.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
Comment from Ulla
Hi Iza, I like the way you write this as a letter to God, explaining how you feel and what is happening in your life. I'm also glad that you have your faith, something I can't identify with. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
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Hi Iza, I like the way you write this as a letter to God, explaining how you feel and what is happening in your life. I'm also glad that you have your faith, something I can't identify with. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
Comment from papa55mike
Now that's an open, honest conversation with the Lord. It what He desires our relationship to be. What a wonderfully written letter.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Now that's an open, honest conversation with the Lord. It what He desires our relationship to be. What a wonderfully written letter.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review
Comment from amada
I read your story and it called to my heart. i am bookkeeping it for inspiration. Godd had made amazing miracles in my life as well. My life is not perfect, still there are miracles i would like to write about. You are a writer who gives inspiration. Thank you.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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I read your story and it called to my heart. i am bookkeeping it for inspiration. Godd had made amazing miracles in my life as well. My life is not perfect, still there are miracles i would like to write about. You are a writer who gives inspiration. Thank you.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much Amada, I have been blessed with his presence since day one:) and our Lord is there even when I don't deserved it...
Comment from DonandVicki
I enjoyed your short story to God but you labeled it as fiction and yet you make it read like it were a true story. A very well constructed prose that has good imagery.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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I enjoyed your short story to God but you labeled it as fiction and yet you make it read like it were a true story. A very well constructed prose that has good imagery.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Thank you, and even if my relationship with God it's true, I labeled as a fiction, because of the people who don't believe in God and the contest requirements:)
Comment from LisaMay
We get a very personal insight to your life and how He has been so instrumental in saving you from yourself on various occasions, to plant more love in your life as a result, e.g. for water and for mountains. And even though your time with your dad was brief, you showed him God's love in the real and the spiritual realm. And saving your own life - He clearly has a purpose for you here on earth, probably to get a better grip on patience, love, and forgiveness, haha.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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We get a very personal insight to your life and how He has been so instrumental in saving you from yourself on various occasions, to plant more love in your life as a result, e.g. for water and for mountains. And even though your time with your dad was brief, you showed him God's love in the real and the spiritual realm. And saving your own life - He clearly has a purpose for you here on earth, probably to get a better grip on patience, love, and forgiveness, haha.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much Ms. Lisa May for this insightful review and heart touching review.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a beautiful and heartfelt poem/letter to God where you recall the miracles God performed in your life. Your letter sounds as though you and God have had a very close relationship all of your life, and you thank Him. Your letter causes the reader to think about and appreciate the things God has done for them. I really enjoyed reading your letter. Best wishes in the contest.
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This is a beautiful and heartfelt poem/letter to God where you recall the miracles God performed in your life. Your letter sounds as though you and God have had a very close relationship all of your life, and you thank Him. Your letter causes the reader to think about and appreciate the things God has done for them. I really enjoyed reading your letter. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
Comment from robyn corum
Iza,
This is a sweet and tender letter to God. We must always remember to thank Him for the prayers He has already answered - and you do that. I liked this piece. Thanks and good luck!
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Iza,
This is a sweet and tender letter to God. We must always remember to thank Him for the prayers He has already answered - and you do that. I liked this piece. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Iza.
This is a very personal letter to God. It is close to being a prayer. You discussed life events with him that show you are talking to Him about real life things. I like the praise and confession you include.
I like this letter a lot. You did very well in expressing your feelings to God.
Robert
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Hello Iza.
This is a very personal letter to God. It is close to being a prayer. You discussed life events with him that show you are talking to Him about real life things. I like the praise and confession you include.
I like this letter a lot. You did very well in expressing your feelings to God.
Robert
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
