Comment from joycetreasures

Excellent

Hello eStory,

This is a marvelous Christmas poem with the church singing "silent night" on the inside. The words are so lovely of Christmas morning at the church. You truly captured this beautiful time of the year which is Christmas. I really enjoyed reading from beginning to the end. It is really a time to celebrate the hope of the world. It is all about Christ Jesus. God bless you and your writing. Thanks. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020

Thanks so much for the excellent review and your wonderful comments supporting the poem. I'm glad the poem was uplifting and captured something of the joy of Christmas. The hope. That was my intent. estory

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is an Absolutely beautiful Christmas poem. I bring you tidings of great joy that shall be for all people for unto you is born this day a saviour who is Christ the lord. The snow falls silently like manna from heaven transforming the world. All is calm all is bright. So beautiful.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020

Thanks so much for the excellent review and so glad you enjoyed the poem estory

Comment from Jeffrey Mitchell

Excellent

Very well written. You captured the spirit of Christmas. From beginning to the last word, you captured my attention. Thank you for sharing your poem

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020

Thanks so much for the excellent review and your wonderful comments supporting the poem. I wanted to keep it simple with that image of the children playing the Nativity scene, and the angels glittering in the stars on a snowy night. Glad you enjoyed it and feel free to read the rest of the book in my portfolio estory

Comment from A. Willow Bends

Excellent

My apologies for no sixes! This is so pure and pristine in its loveliness! One could easily visualize this. NO visual necessary. Good thinking on your part. We all want these moments to return and they will. Let's hang on and pray and hope. Exceptionally beautiful in its simplicity.
Wendy
A. Willow Bends

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020

Thanks so much for the excellent review and all the inspiring comments supporting the poem. I am glad you found it so uplifting; I wanted to keep it simple and sometimes that can be the most effective...estory

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

I enjoyed reading the well-written poem on Christmas! It's the most wonderful time of the year that fills your heart with joy and remind you of the reason for the season. Thanks for sharing. Merry Christmas!

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020

Thanks so much for the wonderful inspiring comments supporting the poem. I am glad you found it so uplifting. I wanted to keep it simple with simple words from the Bible and that image of the children playing the Nativity, the angles glittering in the stars. estory

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

A very visual read, captivating images beholding to my mind of past holidays, refreshing viewpoints of times then for me. I found it well structured and highly appealing to my interests. All stated in my given opinion about this write.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020

Thanks so much for the excellent review and your wonderful comments supporting the poem. estory

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Christmas
by estory

Hello my friend

Beautiful spiritual poem for Christmas. It reminded me of Christmas Eve Mass in Spain when I was a little girl. It's good memories. Thank you for that. Well done.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020

Thanks so much for the wonderful words of support and that Christmas memory. I am glad the poem was able to bring that to life for you. I wanted to keep it simple, simple images of faith, the children playing the Nativity, the angels glittering in the stars on a snowy night. It comes from a memory of a cold, starry Christmas Eve in New York about 45 years ago...estory

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I won't be on fanstory terribly much, it's time for me to publish my friend, I have enjoyed your wonderful writing, and reverential quality and articulation of this wonderful saviour and His amazing creation, beautifully written my friend. May you and yours have a special Christmas and happy new year. Blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020

Thanks so much for the excellent review and your wonderful comments supporting my poetry over the years. You will be missed, my friend. I am glad we were able to share each other's spiritual poetry over these last couple of years...good luck estory

reply by royowen on 26-Dec-2020

Bless you

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about the Christmas magic that can still happens inhoud lives today in small ways that many never notice or other takes for granted.

Merry Christmas to you and your family too.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020

Thanks so much for the excellent review and your wonderful comments supporting the poem. I don't want to live in a world without miracles, that's for sure. I am glad this little poem made one seem more likely this year...estory

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

This is a beautiful scene that you have captured in verse. (Our Christmas in Australia is very different, but still (for Christians at least) based on the essential story of the birth of the Saviour). Love the traditional meaningful Christmas hymns and carols. Blessings to you and your loved ones.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020

Thanks so much for the excellent review and your wonderful comments supporting the poem. I wanted to keep it simple with innocent images and I am glad it seems to have worked. Merry Christmas estory