New Year's 2021
Make it a positive good New Year.2 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
"Change to a good you" is a great last line. It fits your poem perfectly and has much meaning. Hopefully this oncoming year will better. Excellent 5-7-5 form and use of words.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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"Change to a good you" is a great last line. It fits your poem perfectly and has much meaning. Hopefully this oncoming year will better. Excellent 5-7-5 form and use of words.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem is very direct with a clear message. It is an appropriate contest entry and the picture is a good complement. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes for your ongoing creative writing.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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This poem is very direct with a clear message. It is an appropriate contest entry and the picture is a good complement. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes for your ongoing creative writing.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thank you!
