Between Yesterday and Tomorrow
Decisions - we all have to make them.7 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
A beautifully penned and illustrated poem in a difficult form. You did an outstanding job with this and I can see why this won the contest. Superb, dear Faye.
Sending you my best today as always and six stars to bless,
Sal XOs...xo...
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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A beautifully penned and illustrated poem in a difficult form. You did an outstanding job with this and I can see why this won the contest. Superb, dear Faye.
Sending you my best today as always and six stars to bless,
Sal XOs...xo...
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Thank you ever so much for your kind remarks.I had written it some time back and when the contest prompt came up I decided what did I have to lose, so I entered it on a whim. Wish all of my whims worked out that way. Anyway, I really appreciate your review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This etheree, Between Yesterday and Tomorrow, has the proper line 1-10 syllable progression and marks the spot where a decision will be made for the future.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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This etheree, Between Yesterday and Tomorrow, has the proper line 1-10 syllable progression and marks the spot where a decision will be made for the future.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your review. It is much apprecited.
Comment from Leigh Lawhon
Wow! a powerful poem in a tough scheme. I think almost anyone can relate to this. I like how "of the steps I have taken and those I will still have to make," reinforce your theme.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Wow! a powerful poem in a tough scheme. I think almost anyone can relate to this. I like how "of the steps I have taken and those I will still have to make," reinforce your theme.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Thank you ever so much for the comments and the six stars. I really do appreciate them.
Comment from Valerie Fish
I don't know if this is from personal experience, but it is emotional, powerful. I love the 'between yesterday and tomorrow I could imagine someone standing at those cliffs, contemplating; it's a fitting, and beautiful picture .
Good Luck
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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I don't know if this is from personal experience, but it is emotional, powerful. I love the 'between yesterday and tomorrow I could imagine someone standing at those cliffs, contemplating; it's a fitting, and beautiful picture .
Good Luck
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful array of stars and your comments. Yes, it was drawn from inward thoughts about my past and future - mistakes I'e made and hope not to repeat in my decision making.
Comment from zanya
An interesting reflection on that limbo state we find ourselves in when we are faced with making some serious decision in our lives - difficult to choose
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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An interesting reflection on that limbo state we find ourselves in when we are faced with making some serious decision in our lives - difficult to choose
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much. I certainly apprecite your comments, along with the rating.
Comment from Anne Johnston
A very good description of decisions. Like the picture and what it signifies, poised between yesterday and tomorrow. What we decide today will affect our future.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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A very good description of decisions. Like the picture and what it signifies, poised between yesterday and tomorrow. What we decide today will affect our future.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your review. I certainly appreciate your comments, and the rating.
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You are welcome
Comment from greyson ernst
this is also really really good i love the picture to its perfect picture perfect and as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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this is also really really good i love the picture to its perfect picture perfect and as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Tjhank you for your review. I certainly appreciate your comments, and the rating.
