Endless
Our Souls Are...15 total reviews
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
WOW, VERY WELL SAID!!!! How beautiful and you captured every aspect of the soul. But I do hope that at the final, all our souls will meet again, every one that was in our lifetime. that is my hope anyway.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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WOW, VERY WELL SAID!!!! How beautiful and you captured every aspect of the soul. But I do hope that at the final, all our souls will meet again, every one that was in our lifetime. that is my hope anyway.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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I believe that the same souls keep meeting each other throughout lifetimes. Thank you for this wonderful review, and have a very happy holiday. :)
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Then you must believe in reincarnations? I delved into reincarnation when I was in my twenties. Edgar Casey. I thought it was a good aspect, but I went to my minister and he sais no. If there is no reincarnation, there are a hell of a lot of souls hanging around.
Comment from Bill Schott
This piece on the soul, Endless, has a nice take on the power and durability of the soul and its potential to always exist in the universe.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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This piece on the soul, Endless, has a nice take on the power and durability of the soul and its potential to always exist in the universe.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Thank you, you understood this poem very well. I really believe the soul lives many lives, until they learn all that they need to...then it's Heaven bound. Thanks again.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is such a beautifully written poem for the soul writer entry. Great flow and rhyme scheme well put together beautiful words you describe it well. Good luck in the contest. Lovely inspiring write and nice photo.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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This is such a beautifully written poem for the soul writer entry. Great flow and rhyme scheme well put together beautiful words you describe it well. Good luck in the contest. Lovely inspiring write and nice photo.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Thank you for this nice review and your kind words. :)
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Your welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the essense of the soul that us filled with live and goodness as long as we feed our soul lives d goodness when it us fed evil it will become evil.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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A very well-written poem about the essense of the soul that us filled with live and goodness as long as we feed our soul lives d goodness when it us fed evil it will become evil.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reading. I really believe that our souls live many lifetimes, until we learn all that we need to,, and then we are heaven bound. Thanks again for this nice review.
Comment from LisaMay
The concept that the heart is the conduit of the soul's essence - love - with beauty being part of it, makes sense to me. You have expressed this effectively, couched in a well-constructed rhyming poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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The concept that the heart is the conduit of the soul's essence - love - with beauty being part of it, makes sense to me. You have expressed this effectively, couched in a well-constructed rhyming poem. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Thank you for this nice review, I really appreciate it :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your poem here has plenty of heartfelt soul, perfect rhyming and flow and I enjoyed your wistful soulful presentation and hope you win the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Your poem here has plenty of heartfelt soul, perfect rhyming and flow and I enjoyed your wistful soulful presentation and hope you win the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem, I'm glad you like it. It's what I truly believe. Have a great day. :)
Comment from equestrik
Your writing here is so up-beat and light that it is fun to read and enjoy. This could be a heavy topic and though your write is light and cheerful the content is thought provoking.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Your writing here is so up-beat and light that it is fun to read and enjoy. This could be a heavy topic and though your write is light and cheerful the content is thought provoking.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem. It's something I actually believe, that the soul lives many lives. I saw a movie once called Defending your life. Kind of the same subject. Again, thanks for the review. :)
Comment from Dana Starr
Great job. I don't care that much for poetry; however, I really enjoyed this. I can't think of a thing I'd change. Best of luck in the contest. I don't think you'll need it.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Great job. I don't care that much for poetry; however, I really enjoyed this. I can't think of a thing I'd change. Best of luck in the contest. I don't think you'll need it.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you for this very nice review, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Wendy G
This is a lovely poem on quite a difficult topic. It has been well thought through, its flow is smooth, and it relates well to the topic. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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This is a lovely poem on quite a difficult topic. It has been well thought through, its flow is smooth, and it relates well to the topic. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you for this great review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Polly Dolly
You did a great job with rhyme and meter. And the content of your poem is robust too. I especially like your message in the last verse ...drift around until the time, that we again begin. "Colour, music, poetry..." also stood out for me. Was a pleasure to ready. Appreciate steady rhythm. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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You did a great job with rhyme and meter. And the content of your poem is robust too. I especially like your message in the last verse ...drift around until the time, that we again begin. "Colour, music, poetry..." also stood out for me. Was a pleasure to ready. Appreciate steady rhythm. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you for this great review...very appreciated. :)
