Renga Two
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Invisible Foe"multi-author book number two
5 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and boy, are we surrounded by invisible foes, from the Corona virus to Trump Mentality disease. Unfortunately, there's no vaccine for the latter
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and boy, are we surrounded by invisible foes, from the Corona virus to Trump Mentality disease. Unfortunately, there's no vaccine for the latter
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Mike, thank you very much for your review and kind words. I appreciate you took the time to read this poem.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Jasmine Girl
You are right. The climate change comes in a rapid speed with signs that are not always visible. By the time it comes, we are not prepared.
Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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You are right. The climate change comes in a rapid speed with signs that are not always visible. By the time it comes, we are not prepared.
Well done.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Lisa. I appreciate your time to read and review my poem.
Hugs
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
You're so right about that. There are so many "invisible" natural foes. There are viruses and bacteria but there are also fears, worries and conspiracies!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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You're so right about that. There are so many "invisible" natural foes. There are viruses and bacteria but there are also fears, worries and conspiracies!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Helen. Yes, the pandemic is what I was thinking about but there are many natural foes. I appreciate your time to read and review my poem.
Hugs
Gypsy
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is another excellent chapter in the Renga book. Just one little niggle. The foe shown in the image is visible, in contrast to what is written in the poem.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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This is another excellent chapter in the Renga book. Just one little niggle. The foe shown in the image is visible, in contrast to what is written in the poem.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Yeah, the picture is not a literal description of the poem... It is surreal. My poem is about the Covid virus. But I do see what you mean.
Thank you very much for your review and kind words, katharine. I appreciate your time to read and review my poem.
Hugs
Gypsy
Comment from Janetsue
This is an excellent addition to your Renga book. I especially like the way it encourages extra thought from the reader. It is easy to think of the virus, but the wind can be deadly as well. And undertows. I definitely think you can consider your series a big success with readers, my friend.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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This is an excellent addition to your Renga book. I especially like the way it encourages extra thought from the reader. It is easy to think of the virus, but the wind can be deadly as well. And undertows. I definitely think you can consider your series a big success with readers, my friend.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
hugs,
gypsy