Bubbling Lace
Seeming white lace left when waves w2 total reviews
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
This is a very nice ten word poem. I love the title and the imagery you used looks like a dressmaker's laced handiwork. Also, it's nice how you used your ten lines to describe the ocean's shore bubbling art work. This was a very creative message. Brilliant!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Hello,
This is a very nice ten word poem. I love the title and the imagery you used looks like a dressmaker's laced handiwork. Also, it's nice how you used your ten lines to describe the ocean's shore bubbling art work. This was a very creative message. Brilliant!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for the read, review and encouraging comments.
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You are welcome.
Comment from lancellot
I think this may be a winner. It has that Haiku feel to it that voters on the site love, even in none Haiku contests. The presentation is fitting for the words, but the your lines painted the picture without the image.
Good idea and good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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I think this may be a winner. It has that Haiku feel to it that voters on the site love, even in none Haiku contests. The presentation is fitting for the words, but the your lines painted the picture without the image.
Good idea and good luck.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thanks much for the read and review. Your comments are appreciated.
