Starry Night
Follow.7 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
Sweet and moving picture to go along with you equally sweet write. Good job and best of luck to you in the contest. Merry Christmas to you and yours this season.
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Sweet and moving picture to go along with you equally sweet write. Good job and best of luck to you in the contest. Merry Christmas to you and yours this season.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
Comment from Mark D. R.
Your poem idea combined with your selected illustration mesh together in a nice package for this contest.
Personally, I am not a fan of italic script font for any FS entry. It is often difficult to read, but you have the final poetic control.
However, I am uncomfortable with your 'far' word choice. It is not clear to me how it is meant to be used. An alternative might be:
Child for (sic) one holy night.
Stay safe during this upcoming holiday season.
Mark
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Your poem idea combined with your selected illustration mesh together in a nice package for this contest.
Personally, I am not a fan of italic script font for any FS entry. It is often difficult to read, but you have the final poetic control.
However, I am uncomfortable with your 'far' word choice. It is not clear to me how it is meant to be used. An alternative might be:
Child for (sic) one holy night.
Stay safe during this upcoming holiday season.
Mark
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is a beautiful and meaningful presentation. Great job with its style and image. I enjoyed reading it. Perhaps you could add a ~ after line ~ just an idea or not. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your contest entry is a beautiful and meaningful presentation. Great job with its style and image. I enjoyed reading it. Perhaps you could add a ~ after line ~ just an idea or not. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, it is a poem written at the right time for such a theme. It looks nice too and the internal rhymes and end rhymes do not sound forced. The second line seems to be from the travelers point of view as they make their way.
Good idea.
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Hmm, it is a poem written at the right time for such a theme. It looks nice too and the internal rhymes and end rhymes do not sound forced. The second line seems to be from the travelers point of view as they make their way.
Good idea.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written 2 line poem. Great writing prompt entry for the contest. Such a Beautiful photo to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a nicely written 2 line poem. Great writing prompt entry for the contest. Such a Beautiful photo to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent entry in this two line poetry contest, with exactly the right amount of syllables and a great seasonal theme, and the wise men who we need this very day, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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This is an excellent entry in this two line poetry contest, with exactly the right amount of syllables and a great seasonal theme, and the wise men who we need this very day, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thanks for a very positive review Roy. Glad you enjoyed.
Geoff
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Most welcome
Comment from Justin Chopin
A very, wonderful piece Wils. I'm impressed by how you were able to articulate your poetic thoughts and verses about Jesus and doing so with just two lines to work with. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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A very, wonderful piece Wils. I'm impressed by how you were able to articulate your poetic thoughts and verses about Jesus and doing so with just two lines to work with. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thanks very much for your review.
Geoff
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome.
