Treasure Collector?
A Bargain13 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
I was looking over the poems and I read this one which is true.
Do you know I bought a book by Dummies that was about how to declutter your home. It was very informational and it works too.
I have this group of cups that was given to me over the use and I mentioned them to my son, since they are out for people to see, and he said have you ever thought about USING SOME? I looked at him and said no, they are too cute and they are a gift that I just want to look at.
Last week I took one, a Christmas one, to use.
I enjoy your poem and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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I was looking over the poems and I read this one which is true.
Do you know I bought a book by Dummies that was about how to declutter your home. It was very informational and it works too.
I have this group of cups that was given to me over the use and I mentioned them to my son, since they are out for people to see, and he said have you ever thought about USING SOME? I looked at him and said no, they are too cute and they are a gift that I just want to look at.
Last week I took one, a Christmas one, to use.
I enjoy your poem and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you for this stellar review...I'm not alone in my "hobby" I've been told. I'll bet those cups are beautiful, enjoy them...I had a lot of fun with my animated pony! Lol. Thanks again for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about your imperfect desire to restore imperfect items that you can get for free to restore and make them look like new or at least in working condition.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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A very well-written poem about your imperfect desire to restore imperfect items that you can get for free to restore and make them look like new or at least in working condition.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the nice review
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
As it is said that the road to perfection is riddled with many obstacles! If you are happy with yourself and take pleasure in doing things you like, you have won the battle. I liked the way you have penned these lines. Good luck in the contest. Merry Christmas!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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As it is said that the road to perfection is riddled with many obstacles! If you are happy with yourself and take pleasure in doing things you like, you have won the battle. I liked the way you have penned these lines. Good luck in the contest. Merry Christmas!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for this nice review! Hope you and your family have a wonderful holiday!
Comment from lyenochka
I like the humor you put in this poem. Although I don't collect other people's junk, I don't throw out my own so the end result is the same for your kids and mine. Best wishes in the contest!
"hen I pay those who haul away peoples refuse." (people's)
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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I like the humor you put in this poem. Although I don't collect other people's junk, I don't throw out my own so the end result is the same for your kids and mine. Best wishes in the contest!
"hen I pay those who haul away peoples refuse." (people's)
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thanks for reading and for the correction, it's all very appreciated. :)
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You had my vote. Hope you do well!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Very cute poem you got my vote:)
It's a strong compulsion that's hard to control,
but when I see a free pile, it speaks to my soul.
My kids gave up on me a long time ago,
they know they'll be loading up things people throw.'
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Very cute poem you got my vote:)
It's a strong compulsion that's hard to control,
but when I see a free pile, it speaks to my soul.
My kids gave up on me a long time ago,
they know they'll be loading up things people throw.'
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your vote. It really means a lot to me. Happy holidays to you and yours. :)
Comment from Lisa Greene
I love this poem! It's hysterical! You did such a good job with the wording and the ryhmes. A very unique, very clever poem! Great job! I wish you lots more happy hunting :)
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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I love this poem! It's hysterical! You did such a good job with the wording and the ryhmes. A very unique, very clever poem! Great job! I wish you lots more happy hunting :)
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you, that's so kind of you. Have a good evening. :)
Comment from equestrik
I like this write and enjoyed the complete presentation with the picture as well as your writing. My dad always loved going to flea markets and even the dump to look for treasure.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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I like this write and enjoyed the complete presentation with the picture as well as your writing. My dad always loved going to flea markets and even the dump to look for treasure.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem. I'll bet your dad found a lot of good stuff! Hope you and your family have a great holiday. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am with you all the way here and I just love recycling old things and giving them new life! Your poem has a fine meter with perfect rhymes and I wish I had a six left for you, a delightful read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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I am with you all the way here and I just love recycling old things and giving them new life! Your poem has a fine meter with perfect rhymes and I wish I had a six left for you, a delightful read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review that made me smile. :)
Comment from Lucy de Welles
Absolutely wonderful contest entry that all readers will be able to relate to. I think that the hunt for treasure is built into the hearts of human beings. "The kingdom of heaven in like a treasure ...." Just need to burn the chaff and keep the gold, silver, and precious stones!
Well done!
Lucy
Many people have found significant treasure. So the chase is on!!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Absolutely wonderful contest entry that all readers will be able to relate to. I think that the hunt for treasure is built into the hearts of human beings. "The kingdom of heaven in like a treasure ...." Just need to burn the chaff and keep the gold, silver, and precious stones!
Well done!
Lucy
Many people have found significant treasure. So the chase is on!!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem. I'm glad I'm not alone, and I'm still waiting to find that rare painting or expensive artifact. Thanks again for reading. :)
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very nice and part of my life after helping try to make sense of my recently deceased cousin's collection. There were actually treasures in there. Yours is also a treasure. I am no poet but I enjoyed the light tone and truth of your poem. I do, however, suspect there are a few places that the rhythm falters. Best wishes for this delightful work.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Very nice and part of my life after helping try to make sense of my recently deceased cousin's collection. There were actually treasures in there. Yours is also a treasure. I am no poet but I enjoyed the light tone and truth of your poem. I do, however, suspect there are a few places that the rhythm falters. Best wishes for this delightful work.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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I'm very positive that the rhythm is off in places..lol. That's just the way I roll when I write. It's all true by the way..even the pony! Thanks for reading. :)
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But it was fun to read.
