Wonderland
Life is good when shared with a loving wife.4 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written 2 Line poem you have penned for the contest. The art work you chose goes well with your words. Best wishes in the contest and Merry Christmas! Teri
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
This is a very nice and well written 2 Line poem you have penned for the contest. The art work you chose goes well with your words. Best wishes in the contest and Merry Christmas! Teri
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your read and kind review.
Comment from mauial
I love the sentiment of your poem. I see your internal rhyme is life/ wife's. I think it woud have been a better read if the internal rhyme fell on the same syallable count in each line.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
I love the sentiment of your poem. I see your internal rhyme is life/ wife's. I think it woud have been a better read if the internal rhyme fell on the same syallable count in each line.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Changed line, not quit what was suggested but exact rhyme.
Thank my wife for her hand.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a sweet romantic poem, appropriate for the writing prompt, with a picture that complements it nicely. The ending rhyme works well too. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
This is a sweet romantic poem, appropriate for the writing prompt, with a picture that complements it nicely. The ending rhyme works well too. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Much appreciated.
Comment from patw27
Nice poem. Short, concise and right to the point. There's probably no better feeling in the world than to share your life with someone who cares about you just as much as you care for them. To be each other's rock. I'm happy for you
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
Nice poem. Short, concise and right to the point. There's probably no better feeling in the world than to share your life with someone who cares about you just as much as you care for them. To be each other's rock. I'm happy for you
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Yes, I am lucky. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Much appreciated.