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7 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Okay... I'm thinking that maybe it would be best if you stepped away from the key board for a while... perhaps being all cooped up inside is getting to you... ? ;) :) :) LOL!! LOL!! Another fun installment in this series although I'm a bit worried where we're going for the next part... ;) :) Yvette
You supposed to --> You're supposed to
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Okay... I'm thinking that maybe it would be best if you stepped away from the key board for a while... perhaps being all cooped up inside is getting to you... ? ;) :) :) LOL!! LOL!! Another fun installment in this series although I'm a bit worried where we're going for the next part... ;) :) Yvette
You supposed to --> You're supposed to
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Thank you
Comment from estory
This has lots of personality, lots of little wise cracks strewn all through it. I loved all the Spanish thrown in to lighten up the mood. Shto Eto; That's What's up? in Russian, right? estory
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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This has lots of personality, lots of little wise cracks strewn all through it. I loved all the Spanish thrown in to lighten up the mood. Shto Eto; That's What's up? in Russian, right? estory
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Thank you, and yes you are right about the Russian:)
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And Dobri Den is good morning. I had a Ukrainian friend when I was a kid. estory
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Dobar Den is used in Bulgarian too and it means the same thing.
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hi Iza
Very funny and witty throughout. It is like two squabbling little children who are trying to out do each other. A light hearted twist on the contradictions that at times can haunt us all.
Who will win?
Please let me know when part 3 is up and running
Take care, Pete
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Hi Iza
Very funny and witty throughout. It is like two squabbling little children who are trying to out do each other. A light hearted twist on the contradictions that at times can haunt us all.
Who will win?
Please let me know when part 3 is up and running
Take care, Pete
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Both of you are soooo snarky! You keep outdoing yourself with snide remarks--as to who is wittier it's a toss up between you and you. Funny bit about Gamlet!
The scene represents an emptyr [empty] room.
post card from Mexic. [Mexico].
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Both of you are soooo snarky! You keep outdoing yourself with snide remarks--as to who is wittier it's a toss up between you and you. Funny bit about Gamlet!
The scene represents an emptyr [empty] room.
post card from Mexic. [Mexico].
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Thank you
Comment from lyenochka
Well, I guess the ME is outsmarting the EVILME in a clever way by being the crazy Ophelia. I think you might want to put a note that Russians pronounce English H-words with a "G." You and I know but I don't think most English speakers know.
Comments/Typo:
represents an emptyr room. (empty)
Beatling me! (Beating?)
pull an Ophelia one me! (on?)
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Well, I guess the ME is outsmarting the EVILME in a clever way by being the crazy Ophelia. I think you might want to put a note that Russians pronounce English H-words with a "G." You and I know but I don't think most English speakers know.
Comments/Typo:
represents an emptyr room. (empty)
Beatling me! (Beating?)
pull an Ophelia one me! (on?)
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Thank you
Comment from royowen
I like these fights with each other, "evil me" and "me". You are a great two headed person dear Iza, I think all of us have a two headed person living within us, each pulling in a different direction, well done Iza, blessings Roy
Typo : stop (Beatles) me. Beatling?
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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I like these fights with each other, "evil me" and "me". You are a great two headed person dear Iza, I think all of us have a two headed person living within us, each pulling in a different direction, well done Iza, blessings Roy
Typo : stop (Beatles) me. Beatling?
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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Hello Mr. Roy:) thank you so much for your quick review:) I meant the musical group Beatles, have I wrote it wrong?
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I know what you meaning but you should have ?beatling? as a verb dear girl.
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Okay thanks:) for teaching me another world today:)
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Well done, not a real word, but an adequate one Iza.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a fun script. I always enjoy satires based on Shakespeare's plays. There is much in this script that is yet to be revealed. Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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This is a fun script. I always enjoy satires based on Shakespeare's plays. There is much in this script that is yet to be revealed. Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for your support with this book:)
