Planted on Perry Street
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "I've Got a New Way to Walk"A Garden Witch Cozy Mystery.
6 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Aah sweet mystery if love! It happens in a second. We look, we see, we want. My goodness, this is becoming very interesting. Maddie being a witch, could cast a spell, no? Wait and see.
Ralf
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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Aah sweet mystery if love! It happens in a second. We look, we see, we want. My goodness, this is becoming very interesting. Maddie being a witch, could cast a spell, no? Wait and see.
Ralf
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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Thanks, Ralf! So her being a witch isn't offensive to you? This is my first cozy, and contemporary witches have a solid base of readers, so I'm just trying my hand at it.
Comment from royowen
I can tell you're a seasoned writer, with a style all her own. Your New York setting is generally a good, (particularly since my wife and I have journeyed there four times) but a nice, normal heroine installed, (an age would be good, obviously not super young) but I I do like the backstory, and more fist person driven, well done good plot and characters, Laurie, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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I can tell you're a seasoned writer, with a style all her own. Your New York setting is generally a good, (particularly since my wife and I have journeyed there four times) but a nice, normal heroine installed, (an age would be good, obviously not super young) but I I do like the backstory, and more fist person driven, well done good plot and characters, Laurie, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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Thanks, Roy! I know it takes a chunk of your day out to read a chapter, and I truly appreciate your taking the time! Have a great evening.
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Most welcome
Comment from Judy Lawless
Hi Laurie. Being relatively new here I'm jumping into novels that have already left the station, but I really enjoyed reading this chapter, even without knowing what came before it. Your sense of humour shines through the telling. I look forward to more.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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Hi Laurie. Being relatively new here I'm jumping into novels that have already left the station, but I really enjoyed reading this chapter, even without knowing what came before it. Your sense of humour shines through the telling. I look forward to more.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much, Judy, and welcome! You can always go back and read the previous chapters if you catch a chapter of a novel in the middle. At least I think so. With my novel, the others are posted, so feel free if/when you have the inclination and time. Meanwhile, have fun! I love this community; helpful, good advice, solid feedback.
Comment from greyson ernst
this is amazing i really hope i see more writing from you soon and as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday :D
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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this is amazing i really hope i see more writing from you soon and as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday :D
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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Thanks, Greyson! I appreciate your having taken the time to read it!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This fiction speaks about Maggie got a new way to walk home from the police station expressed through a fair taletelling, progressed by a fast plot development, fostered by just few appropriate dialogues, ends with a decision regarding a robbery case; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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This fiction speaks about Maggie got a new way to walk home from the police station expressed through a fair taletelling, progressed by a fast plot development, fostered by just few appropriate dialogues, ends with a decision regarding a robbery case; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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You're my hero today. Thank you so much.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Crush on a Policeman, and not on a Firefighter:) I am curious to see how this crash-rush will evolve in the next chapter. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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Crush on a Policeman, and not on a Firefighter:) I am curious to see how this crash-rush will evolve in the next chapter. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much, Iza. I appreciate your time on this!
