Christmas Might Be Late
Santa 5-7-5 contest entry20 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
Hahahaha..covid once again rears it's ugly head in this humorous 5-7-5. Poor Santa! Christmas might indeed be late, just one more thing to bug us in this pandemic. Very good entry, best of luck to you.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Hahahaha..covid once again rears it's ugly head in this humorous 5-7-5. Poor Santa! Christmas might indeed be late, just one more thing to bug us in this pandemic. Very good entry, best of luck to you.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, Boogie. The contest is already over now but thank you for the good luck wishes. I really appreciate the generous stars, B. Have yourself a great Christmas.
Ron
Comment from robyn corum
DS,
Well, this was just fun for SO MANY reasons! I don't understand people who can't laugh at life - how else can you expect to get through it??!!!
I thought this was fun, humorous, and just COOL. Your syllable counts are all just right and the problem is -- I have read YOUR post first, and now all the other entries must measure up to it.... gonna be hard, I think. haha
AND I think that image is a great accompaniment. Fab job on that creation. (You may have missed your calling!) Oh, wait. That can't be right, because you are so good at writing. hahaha
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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DS,
Well, this was just fun for SO MANY reasons! I don't understand people who can't laugh at life - how else can you expect to get through it??!!!
I thought this was fun, humorous, and just COOL. Your syllable counts are all just right and the problem is -- I have read YOUR post first, and now all the other entries must measure up to it.... gonna be hard, I think. haha
AND I think that image is a great accompaniment. Fab job on that creation. (You may have missed your calling!) Oh, wait. That can't be right, because you are so good at writing. hahaha
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Hey, Robin, hello. Thank you for the fantastic review. You're the best. You always give the greatest reviews.
Yeah, we have to laugh at this life sometimes. You're right, life would be so boring if you couldn't laugh at nearly everything. I really appreciate stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again.
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Ron
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Only you would go there with Santa, Ron -- but I had to grin and chuckle. :) ;) Of course, you think I could attribute that to raising three sons to adulthood [I'm the lone female in the house... ;) :) :)]...? ;) :) Thanx for sharing, sir, and best of luck at the polls! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Only you would go there with Santa, Ron -- but I had to grin and chuckle. :) ;) Of course, you think I could attribute that to raising three sons to adulthood [I'm the lone female in the house... ;) :) :)]...? ;) :) Thanx for sharing, sir, and best of luck at the polls! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Yvette. Yeah, I always like to step a little over the line. lol I appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece.
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Ron
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Great entry for the 5-7-5 santa writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
That's not a good present :(
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Hello, my friend,
Great entry for the 5-7-5 santa writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
That's not a good present :(
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Gypsy. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. I hope you have a great Christmas.
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Ron
Comment from Bill Schott
This Santa 5-7-5, Christmas Might Be Late, has the proper formatting and sees that no one is secure from the ravages of COVID-19. HopeSanta heals quickly.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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This Santa 5-7-5, Christmas Might Be Late, has the proper formatting and sees that no one is secure from the ravages of COVID-19. HopeSanta heals quickly.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Bill. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. Yeah, he's only got a week left so he better get to feeling better quick. lol Have a great Christmas.
Ron
Comment from amada
Oh dear, this is funny, it gave me a chuckle; and then I thought this is terrible, I shouldn't laugh about this. But I do think your lines are well written and they had the intended effect.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Oh dear, this is funny, it gave me a chuckle; and then I thought this is terrible, I shouldn't laugh about this. But I do think your lines are well written and they had the intended effect.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Amada. I really appreciate the generous stars. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas.
Ron
Comment from royowen
A mirthful post, what if Santa caught the virus, off an angry elf no Less, things would be grim for the children of the world, particularly if they committed him to a nursing home. Well done, an excellent 5/7/5 good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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A mirthful post, what if Santa caught the virus, off an angry elf no Less, things would be grim for the children of the world, particularly if they committed him to a nursing home. Well done, an excellent 5/7/5 good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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lol Thank you for the great review and gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Ron
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Most welcome
Comment from equestrik
This is a new take on the 2020 Christmas season. Santa with covid, very unbelievable-he is supposed to be invincible. Good picture to go with your write.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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This is a new take on the 2020 Christmas season. Santa with covid, very unbelievable-he is supposed to be invincible. Good picture to go with your write.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, equestrik.
Comment from jaded831
You made me laugh before my morning coffee, not an easy task. So far your poem is the best, but I need to read them all before I vote. Also the picture is perfect for your words. The entire package gets a thumbs up.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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You made me laugh before my morning coffee, not an easy task. So far your poem is the best, but I need to read them all before I vote. Also the picture is perfect for your words. The entire package gets a thumbs up.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Jaded. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Dragon, I gladly give out five stars for both your poem and your artwork in that illustration. I think you deserve 10 stars for a sense of humor and using your talents in bringing this COVID thing into balance. It is not the end of the world you know! Just the end of an era.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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Dear Dragon, I gladly give out five stars for both your poem and your artwork in that illustration. I think you deserve 10 stars for a sense of humor and using your talents in bringing this COVID thing into balance. It is not the end of the world you know! Just the end of an era.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Suzanna. Yeah, too many people take life way too seriously sometimes. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars for the artwork as well. I love playing with my art program nearly as much as writing. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas. Thank you again.
Ron
