Renga Two
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Grateful and Happy"multi-author book number two
8 total reviews
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Grateful and happy to be an American. Hopeful that we continue to overcome the international as well as internal threats. Sometimes the domestic problems are more difficult. Such as the Prosecutor in Los Angeles who is not enforcing the law and creating chaos. No edits or adjustments necessary to your work...can't say the same for our society right now.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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Grateful and happy to be an American. Hopeful that we continue to overcome the international as well as internal threats. Sometimes the domestic problems are more difficult. Such as the Prosecutor in Los Angeles who is not enforcing the law and creating chaos. No edits or adjustments necessary to your work...can't say the same for our society right now.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy--and lady liberty was lost in the fog during the last four years, but now her beacon has once again started shining on the world; I just hope Trump's damage is reversible
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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Another fine poem, Gypsy--and lady liberty was lost in the fog during the last four years, but now her beacon has once again started shining on the world; I just hope Trump's damage is reversible
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and feedback.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your patriotic 5-7-5 and I like your colorful presentation! I know that some think that only people of their own political party can be truly patriotic but you know it comes from the heart, not from political association!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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Great job with your patriotic 5-7-5 and I like your colorful presentation! I know that some think that only people of their own political party can be truly patriotic but you know it comes from the heart, not from political association!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very nice and very well written 5/7/5 Regan poem. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love, Teri
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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Gypsy, This is a very nice and very well written 5/7/5 Regan poem. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love, Teri
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I have found a typo:
5/7/5 Regan Chapter 29 -> 5/7/5 Renga Chapter 29.
It's another great presentation.
I totally agree with you. I love this country, too.
Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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I have found a typo:
5/7/5 Regan Chapter 29 -> 5/7/5 Renga Chapter 29.
It's another great presentation.
I totally agree with you. I love this country, too.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. I will fix that. Thanks!
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Gloria ....
So true, Gypsy. The USA took out all quarters for a test drive during Trump's term. The beautiful thing is, your institutions survived because of American's dedication to country over party is strong...well except for far too many of what used to be the Republican party.
Excellent presentation with the red, white and blue to signify your love of nation.
A most enjoyable read today.
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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So true, Gypsy. The USA took out all quarters for a test drive during Trump's term. The beautiful thing is, your institutions survived because of American's dedication to country over party is strong...well except for far too many of what used to be the Republican party.
Excellent presentation with the red, white and blue to signify your love of nation.
A most enjoyable read today.
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. It is original and unique. It is well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. It is original and unique. It is well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Thank you, Raul
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You're welcome!
Comment from mermaids
I like the red, white and blue colors to your lines, they add to the impact of your poem. You have written a positive poem that is important right now, we need to remember the greatness of this country.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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I like the red, white and blue colors to your lines, they add to the impact of your poem. You have written a positive poem that is important right now, we need to remember the greatness of this country.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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We are a resilient country and we will overcome everything that comes along. We survived this year, it's quite an accomplishment.
Thank you very much for reviewing and giving me your helpful feedback.
Hugs,
Gypsy