Creating Christmas
Once the magic is created, mom goes to her favorite place.4 total reviews
Comment from Polly Dolly
Your rhyme and meter is very tight throughout. There is one verse that doesn't bounce like the rest, "I eat the cookies, milk I chug,
And climb into my bed all snug." I think it's the "into" that changes the rhythm and then short changes at the end. But every other verse is consistent and done so well, it stands out. Well deserved 5 star regardless.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Your rhyme and meter is very tight throughout. There is one verse that doesn't bounce like the rest, "I eat the cookies, milk I chug,
And climb into my bed all snug." I think it's the "into" that changes the rhythm and then short changes at the end. But every other verse is consistent and done so well, it stands out. Well deserved 5 star regardless.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your kind words. I appreciate your thoughtful review. Merry Christmas.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
It is an Epic effort every Christmas for women especially and I don't doubt for a minute that bed would be your favourite place, especially after your Herculian actions. Blessings and Peace.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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It is an Epic effort every Christmas for women especially and I don't doubt for a minute that bed would be your favourite place, especially after your Herculian actions. Blessings and Peace.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your review. I don't do all that stuff anymore as my children are grown, but I can't believe I used to get it all done. LOL merry Christmas.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Very well done. A mother is very busy preparing Christmas for everyone else and she deserves to find her favourite place - in your case a bed to rest in. Merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Very well done. A mother is very busy preparing Christmas for everyone else and she deserves to find her favourite place - in your case a bed to rest in. Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your kind words. Merry Christmas to you!
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You are welcome
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Thank you!
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You are welcome
Comment from greyson ernst
good luck in this contest i love it but a picture would be perfect and as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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good luck in this contest i love it but a picture would be perfect and as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Thank you. I will consider attaching photos with my next entry. Merry Christmas!
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