Backwards
Life challange13 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written hundred and fifty word life story about living a life quite the opposite of what you want willingly. To me it happens unwillingly everything I want slips away and what I don't want clings to me.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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A very well-written hundred and fifty word life story about living a life quite the opposite of what you want willingly. To me it happens unwillingly everything I want slips away and what I don't want clings to me.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much
Comment from kmoss
This gave me a chuckle. Sometimes things are better left unplanned. This sentence needs corrected: Bulgarian University and study literature instead of my dream, archeology.
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This gave me a chuckle. Sometimes things are better left unplanned. This sentence needs corrected: Bulgarian University and study literature instead of my dream, archeology.
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
Comment from equestrik
It's interesting how life moes us around sometimes and we amend our previous dreams. This write speaks of tis to me. Nice write and good attention getting picture!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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It's interesting how life moes us around sometimes and we amend our previous dreams. This write speaks of tis to me. Nice write and good attention getting picture!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for stopping by and understanding my struggle.
Comment from LisaMay
Your story is very entertaining and humorous while revealing the various twists and outcomes of your backwards life as you advance through it. Life itself will dictate what we do, not our feeble efforts at controlling it.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Your story is very entertaining and humorous while revealing the various twists and outcomes of your backwards life as you advance through it. Life itself will dictate what we do, not our feeble efforts at controlling it.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Raul1
This story meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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This story meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
What your story has that others lack, is humor. It is situation humor. That will draw the reader in to identify. Many readers will be invited to laugh at themselves rather than be filled with regret. Thank you for sharing your story.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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What your story has that others lack, is humor. It is situation humor. That will draw the reader in to identify. Many readers will be invited to laugh at themselves rather than be filled with regret. Thank you for sharing your story.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review and for your encouragements:)
Comment from TommyWrites
I love this! It's humor filled, enjoyable, and a great life story even if its "backwards" I am still young, but I really want to become an archaeologist, and even though you talk about your life seeming backwards, in a way it's encouraging. Even if life does go "backwards" for some, this life story of yours shows me things can still turn out. Maybe not in the way you wanted, but still. Your writing is great, and I loved reading this.
My vote is on you!
Thanks for sharing & best of luck in the contest,
TommyWrites~ (who's a girl)
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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I love this! It's humor filled, enjoyable, and a great life story even if its "backwards" I am still young, but I really want to become an archaeologist, and even though you talk about your life seeming backwards, in a way it's encouraging. Even if life does go "backwards" for some, this life story of yours shows me things can still turn out. Maybe not in the way you wanted, but still. Your writing is great, and I loved reading this.
My vote is on you!
Thanks for sharing & best of luck in the contest,
TommyWrites~ (who's a girl)
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review and for your encouragements:)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Your Life in 150 words writing prompt contest.
Your life is interesting. I was a teacher for ten years and I really loved it. Now I teach haiku. I think you made the right choices for you.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Your Life in 150 words writing prompt contest.
Your life is interesting. I was a teacher for ten years and I really loved it. Now I teach haiku. I think you made the right choices for you.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review and for your encouragements:)
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Mystery Writer.
I love your picture HAHA. Your biography is very interesting and amusing. I laughed when I read the part about your desire to be a ballerina and your loos of the schedule. That certainly put a dent in the dancing career. HAHA
Robert
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Hi Mystery Writer.
I love your picture HAHA. Your biography is very interesting and amusing. I laughed when I read the part about your desire to be a ballerina and your loos of the schedule. That certainly put a dent in the dancing career. HAHA
Robert
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review and for your encouragements:)
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You're welcome.
Comment from Aiona
I love this short tiny autobiography! It really sums up the things you've done. I only saw one typo -- a tense hop. All your sentences are in past tense except the last one.
"I swear that I will never jump into the unknown,"
If you want to keep the tense (past tense) consistent, it should read....'
"I swore that I would never jump into the unknown,"
A fun read!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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I love this short tiny autobiography! It really sums up the things you've done. I only saw one typo -- a tense hop. All your sentences are in past tense except the last one.
"I swear that I will never jump into the unknown,"
If you want to keep the tense (past tense) consistent, it should read....'
"I swore that I would never jump into the unknown,"
A fun read!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review and for your encouragements:)
