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Neither my wife or I are done living yet.
3 total reviews
Comment from
kmoss
Nicely put! It's had to cram 80 years into 150 words, but you managed to tell your story completely, ending on a positive note. "Winter of our lives" is a good description. Good luck!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2020
Thank you for the read and review. Appreciate your comment.
Comment from
Iza Deleanu
Based on the last two sentences we can declare that you are having a great life full of joy and peace:"We both are now in the winter of our lives. We have children and look forward to more of this wonderful life.' Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
Thanks for the read and the feedback. Happy holidays.
Comment from
greyson ernst
good luck in the contest and as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday i hope i see more writing from you soon
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
Thanks for the read and the feedback. Happy holidays.
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