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Help The Homeless

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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This would be an excellent poster or post on fb or other social media. It would be an excellent PSA...public service announcement. It needs to be published.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
    Thank you, that's nice of you to say. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from Lisa Greene
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I love your poem. Such an important thing to remember. No matter when or where, there are always people in need. Kindness is such a beautiful quality to possess, and one that is so needed. Great job of reminding us! One word misspelled: Christmas. But you did a really good job with this poem!

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
    Thank you for reading and for the correction. You'd think after all these years, I'd know how to spell it..lol. Thanks again. :)
Comment from Janetsue
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I used to run an assistance program for the homeless and held two-week seminars on life skills, helped them attain clothing for job interviews, and other things. Your excellent acrostic posting really speaks to me and I wish you the best of luck.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
    Thank you for reading my poem and for all the good work you did. I've always had a concern about the homeless, especially since so many of them are mentally I'll. My son has a mental illness and I can't image him being out in the cold, alone. Thanks again for this amazing review. :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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This poem has touched my heart. The homeless is in need of clothing and food to make them content. I do give to the homeless; I have also written sequels about them, they were the main subject.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
    Thank you for reading my poem and for helping out those in need. The homeless have always been a concern of mine, especially knowing that many of them suffer from mental illness. My son has schizophrenia and I can't imagine him being alone, out in the cold. We all need to give what we can, no matter how little. Every penny counts. Thanks again. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, anonymous,

Excellent entry for the Acrostic Poem contest. Your vertical words form the title correctly and the stanzas flow well. Yours is my favorite so far. Good luck!

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
    Thank you so much for this great review, it means a lot to me. :)
Comment from Paul Borders
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I voted for your contest submission. No other entry came close to capturing the Christmas spirit. It appears your acrostic poem will take first place - well done.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
    Thank you for this wonderful review, for your kind words and your vote! My day has been made. :)
Comment from lyenochka
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Amen! And these organizations that help the homeless are in such dire need especially this year due to so many losing jobs. Thank you for this reminder. Best wishes in the contest!

Typo:
Paise be to the lord, it's for Him that we're glad. (Praise) and suggest capitalizing Lord

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
    Thank you for pointing out those errors..I've already fixed them. I really appreciate the help. :)
reply by lyenochka on 18-Dec-2020
    You're most welcome! Your message was so important. You had my vote.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fine plea to help the homeless here and just now there are more homeless people because of Covid and people have lost their livelihoods, a heartfelt acrostic here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
    Thank you for this great review....it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Wendy G
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This is a very compassionate and thoughtful poem, and it is well-written. The acrostic form sits smoothly with your words. The image is just right. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
    Thank you so much for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from w.j.debi
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This is a great reminder that no matter how hard our lives get, there is someone out there who is struggling even more and would appreciate an act of kindness, a little to eat, a place to sleep. We can look around and find someone in need of help.
An excellent Acrostic poem that flows smoothly. Great message. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
    Thank you for this nice review and for your insightful comments. :)