Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Exceptional

Hi Ulla, I like this haiku very much and what a lovely tribute to Jan. It seems very balanced to me, comfortable to read and perfect for the intention of a tribute. Yeah work is especially suitable, too. Hugs, Giddy

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020

Thank you so much, Giddy, and for your lovely recognition. I'm glad you thought it right for the occassion. Thank you so much, again. Ulla xxxx

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Enough time can ease the pain, or everyday pain, of almost everything. The fond memories can keep the hungry birds away to some degree. Then, we just have to look to tomorrow, and try to block out yesterday. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020

Thank you so much, Ric. I so appreciate your review. Ulla:)))

Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante

Excellent

This is a sweet haiku for Jannypan, Ulla. In my own experiences with loss, I have found that precious memories are a soothing comfort and something to uplift me, as I thought about things that happened to us in the past, both small and great. We can leave the bad times, the negative things, back in the past as much as possible, and hold onto our treasured memories. It is a kind thought and a beautiful image, a lovely presentation.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020

Thank you so much, Mary Kay. I so appreciate this lovely review. Ulla:)))

reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 16-Dec-2020

You're very welcome, Ulla, my friend. - Mary Kay xoxo

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Oh my. Who did Jan lose? ={ This is a lovely haiku about memories. So true, it seems when someone leaves you, the good memories are much sharper. Well done as always.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020

Thank you so much, Roxanna. I so appreciate it. Ulla:)))

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

What a beautifully written poem. A lovely tribute. So true. It's the fond, happy memories that will stay in our hearts forever. Your Artwork is gorgeous, perfect for the poem.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020

Thanks a lot, Misty. I so appreciate your lovely review. Ulla:)))

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Thank you, Ulla, for the beautiful prayer, kind thoughts, and awesome pairing of the gold rose. I appreciate you and your prayer so much.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020

My thought are with you.:)))

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

A great poem and nice layout. Which Jan? As usual these tiny poems want a great long review. The colour scheme is good as well. Can't find any spags this time around.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020

Thanks a lot, Geoff. I have added Jannypan in the subtitle. I'm glad you liked it. Ulla:)))

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

A beautiful tribute id 5-7-5 form. one very minor point, since this is aimed at a US citizen I would suggest you go for the US option - all three words gglued together as one. This is what the wiktionary says:

'In the United Kingdom and most of the Commonwealth, the spelling for evermore is the usual form. In Canada and the United States, generally only forevermore is used.'

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it, and I've taken your advise on board and edited accordingly. Again I've learned something new. Thanks a lot. Ulla:)))

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Ah, Jan will just love this, dear Ulla. So tender and sweet. A fine short verse Haiku that says volumes. Sending you my best today as always, and blessings for the day,
Sal XOs....

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020

Thank you so much, Sally, I so appreciate your lovely words. Ulla xxx