His Christmas Wish
Political Senryu contest entry7 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Some people on this site would probably want to tar & feather you. What you have said was perfect. I think the courts are getting as disgusted with him as Santa is in this depiction. A good topic.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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Some people on this site would probably want to tar & feather you. What you have said was perfect. I think the courts are getting as disgusted with him as Santa is in this depiction. A good topic.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Liz. I really appreciate generous the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet..
The best of the lot .. you depicted Trump to the T ..
If matters don't go his way , he makes a tantrum..
So childish the way he tweets when he is annoyed ..he can't even behave during news conferences ..
I see Melania is smiling a lot lately .. she can't wait to exit the WH...is it possible she voted for Biden? ( biggrin)
You did a great job with the photoshop!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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Ciao mystery poet..
The best of the lot .. you depicted Trump to the T ..
If matters don't go his way , he makes a tantrum..
So childish the way he tweets when he is annoyed ..he can't even behave during news conferences ..
I see Melania is smiling a lot lately .. she can't wait to exit the WH...is it possible she voted for Biden? ( biggrin)
You did a great job with the photoshop!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, tempeste. Yeah, he likes to cry whenever things don't go his way. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from mauial
Ha! Very funny senryu you have penned here. A fitting description too of what is going on. I especially like the cry bany's request, my own fair election. It reflects his ego
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Ha! Very funny senryu you have penned here. A fitting description too of what is going on. I especially like the cry bany's request, my own fair election. It reflects his ego
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the great review, mauial. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from LisaMay
Put the baby in a playpen and make him count all those votes again, then tell him we don't believe him, that he rigged it. Bags not me to change his diaper.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Put the baby in a playpen and make him count all those votes again, then tell him we don't believe him, that he rigged it. Bags not me to change his diaper.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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HAHAHA. Thank you for the hilarious review and chuckle, Lisa. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-You did a good job
with your picture.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like your poem, too,
beginning with Santa's
question in nice big letters.
-The reply is even better
with very, very small letters.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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-You did a good job
with your picture.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like your poem, too,
beginning with Santa's
question in nice big letters.
-The reply is even better
with very, very small letters.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Pam. I was hoping someone was going to catch the font size. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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You are very welcome. I appreciate your reply, and am glad you liked my observations:)
Comment from rjuselius
Haha. This is an entertaining piece of poetry dear anonymous! I can just imagine the way trump whines with a very annoying voice.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a super-dooper squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Haha. This is an entertaining piece of poetry dear anonymous! I can just imagine the way trump whines with a very annoying voice.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a super-dooper squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 12-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Rebekka. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silliness,
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My pleasure entirely dear dragonskulls <3
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I was wondering how you found a picture that fits perfectly. Great job on the poem and the picture. I like how you formatted this. I think your message is solid. What a great presentation.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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I was wondering how you found a picture that fits perfectly. Great job on the poem and the picture. I like how you formatted this. I think your message is solid. What a great presentation.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Michael. I really appreciate the generous stars. Yeah, I like playing around with my art program nearly as much as writing. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
