Perfect
a free verse15 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Yes indeed, I've found that competition is an excellent fillip for the inspired post, togerther with all the clever, poetic devices that one can muster in their poetic journey through a poetic epic. Beautifully written my friend, with all those devices tracking their way through the work, excellent job, good luck, blessings Roy
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Yes indeed, I've found that competition is an excellent fillip for the inspired post, togerther with all the clever, poetic devices that one can muster in their poetic journey through a poetic epic. Beautifully written my friend, with all those devices tracking their way through the work, excellent job, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Thank you, Roy
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Bless you
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Hello! Thanks for a really fun read. I have seen a couple other entries in this contest already and (shhhhh...) yours far outshines every one.
I liked the message and the delivery. Here is my favorite part - with one suggestion:
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Some (sculpt) sonnets,
hew haiku, lay out limericks,
venture a villanelle,
or paint a portrait in prose,
positioning for approval.
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As a matter of fact, I want to post this portion on my profile page as my writing quote of the day. If you don't want me to, I'll take it down immediately. If it IS okay - let me know as soon as the voting is over and I'll add your name as the author. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Hello! Thanks for a really fun read. I have seen a couple other entries in this contest already and (shhhhh...) yours far outshines every one.
I liked the message and the delivery. Here is my favorite part - with one suggestion:
*
Some (sculpt) sonnets,
hew haiku, lay out limericks,
venture a villanelle,
or paint a portrait in prose,
positioning for approval.
*
As a matter of fact, I want to post this portion on my profile page as my writing quote of the day. If you don't want me to, I'll take it down immediately. If it IS okay - let me know as soon as the voting is over and I'll add your name as the author. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Thank you, Robyn. Yes, of course. Very kind of you.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks of perfection in expressions needed in any sort of literary or poetic production, especially for specialized form of poem, a more perfect poet is necessary for a successful composition; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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This poem speaks of perfection in expressions needed in any sort of literary or poetic production, especially for specialized form of poem, a more perfect poet is necessary for a successful composition; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 11-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about competition and practice to become the best poet is something we can do with a sense of pride when others give us recognition for our efforts to become perfect.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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A very well-written poem about competition and practice to become the best poet is something we can do with a sense of pride when others give us recognition for our efforts to become perfect.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from padumachitta
hello
and interesting free verse for the propmt.
I thought the opening line brought the reader in.
I found that the transition form sports to poetry a little jarring.
IMHO I would rather the peom be about one or the other. and be a bit more fleshed out.
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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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hello
and interesting free verse for the propmt.
I thought the opening line brought the reader in.
I found that the transition form sports to poetry a little jarring.
IMHO I would rather the peom be about one or the other. and be a bit more fleshed out.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
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Thanks, p
