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Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "For Jannypan: In Memory of Tim"
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Comment from Ulla
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Dear May, This is a heartfelt poem and comments you have written to Jan. I know that she will be very moved by your words. I also know that she's gone through a very difficult time. Thank you for sharing this beautiful contribution. Ulla xx

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    Thank you, Ulla, for your lovely and empathetic review. I appreciate your kind and thoughtful comments. Yes, she was indeed very moved by my post, and very appreciative. I'm touched by the outpouring of love, prayer and support for her, as reflected in these reviews -- it's what I was hoping for. I feel very blessed and thankful. God bless you, and Merry Christmas.
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Boogienights
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This is a very tender and heartbreaking poem you have written, I hope it brings some comfort to her during this difficult time. Of course I will pray that she gets through this, I understand having lost both my brother and sister a year apart. The pain passes and good memories replace it. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    Thank you very much, Boogienights, for your excellent and very empathetic review. I appreciate your thoughtful comments, everything you shared and especially your prayers. I also lost a brother in 2005, and experienced both the intense grief and the sense of relief as it eventually eased, with time. But two losses, a year apart? That must have been very hard to bear. If either or both of your parents were alive, it had to be devastating for them -- I know it was, for my Mom (my father had already passed on). But good memories are very important to hold onto, and a source of comfort. I like your profile picture -- cute puppy! God bless you and the rest of your family, and Merry Christmas!
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Hi Mary, thank you so much for writing this little poem for Jan, I had no idea what is she going through. She always puts a brave face and writes straight from the heart. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    Thank you, dear Iza, for your excellent and caring review. I appreciate your kind and thoughtful comments. May God bless your Christmas and your family, and keep you all safe.
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Mary Kay,
What a loving and moving tribute to Jan and her loving care for her brother.
The message is poignant and your form is creative.
But it is the message that resonates with me the most. Losing a loved one is so incredibly difficult on so many levels. You have encapsulated those feelings, and I am certain Jan is most appreciative.

Thank you, Mary Kay!
diane

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    Thank you so much, Diane, for your beautiful and very empathetic review of my poem. I deeply appreciate your kind, thoughtful and caring comments. Yes, Jan really loved the poem and she expressed that to me beautifully. God bless you, my friend, and may God bless you and your family this Christmas Season, and keep you all safe throughout the New Year.
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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A very touching tribute to the brother who has left this earth. Wonderful heartfelt words penned. I will pray for his soul. God bless you and your family!

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    Thank you very much for your kind, excellent and prayerful review, Seshadri. I appreciate your thoughtful comments. May God bless you too, and keep you and your family safe. - Mary Kay
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
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What a beautiful tribute! I will definitely keep them in my prayers. It is always so difficult to go through a loss of someone so close. Your poem is extremely well written and powerful.
Thank you for writing and for sharing, and may God bless you as well as Jan and her family.
Susan

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    Thank you, Susan, for your excellent, empathetic and lovely review of my poem. I appreciate your thoughtful comments and especially your prayers. Thank you for your blessings. May God bless you also, during this Christmas Season, and may He keep you and your family safe throughout the New Year.
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-A beautiful image and
poem and notes to go with it, Mary Kay.
-Everything came from your heart
and reached into mine.
-I am glad you wrote this tribute
to Jan and her brother Tim.
-It had to have been so difficult
for her to see him battling
this disease, but I am sure he
appreciated all of her loving care,
and the fact that she was there
for him at the end so he wasn't alone.
-Thank you for sharing and also
creating a new form for this
special poem and for Jan, a
special FanStory member.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    Thank you so much, Pam, for your beautiful, touching and exceptional six-star review of my poem. I appreciate that you went into so much detail, and expressed your feelings and thoughts. Yes, Jan is a very special member of FanStory. It's important for her to know how much she's loved, and I'm especially gratified at the outpouring of warmth and caring, in response to this post. May God continue to comfort her, and her family. May He bless you at Christmas, and keep you and your family safe throughout the New Year.
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo
reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Dec-2020
    You are very welcome and deserving, Mary Kay. I am glad you wrote the poem and also got a good response from it. Wishing you Christmas blessings, too.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    Thank you very much, Pam!
reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Dec-2020
    You are welcome, Mary Kay.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
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Love the words to your poem .
they captured my attention from the the first word to the last
My prayers goes out to his family and friend. I bet he will still be writing poem in heaven
.We must rejoice for he is not dead . He now has eternity life.
Happy Holiday to you and yours
Cookie

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
    Dear Cookie,
    Thank you so much for your beautiful and prayerful six-star review. I appreciate your kind and thoughtful comments very much. Merry Christmas, my friend. May all the blessings of Jesus Christ be yours. Love, Mary Kay xoxo
reply by Miss Cookie Atkinson on 13-Dec-2020
    Thank yu very much
    cookie
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    And you're welcome :-)
reply by Miss Cookie Atkinson on 14-Dec-2020
    Until next time my friend.
    Cookie
reply by Miss Cookie Atkinson on 14-Dec-2020
    Until next time.
    Cookie
Comment from sammielwf
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There is no greater love that man can have than that for his brother/sister. In solidarity and prayer for the uplifting in Spirit for Jan and her family- my family and I send strength through our prayers and thoughts.
Thank you Mary Kay for lightening the burden of your friend/ our friend Jan by creating a new poetic style and for bringing her to the forefront of our thoughts.
Sammielwf

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    Thank you so very much, Sammie LWF, for your prayerful and loving review of my poem. I greatly appreciate your very warm and meaningful comments, and especially your prayers. Thank you for all of your kindness. May God bless you and your family especially at Christmas, and keep you all safe throughout the New Year.
    - Mary Kay
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A tribute to a fellow Fanstorian here who has suffered a loss in the family. Your words are heartfelt and melancholy Mary and you have shown much kindness here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    Thank you so much, Dolly, for your kind and empathetic review. I deeply appreciate your thoughtful comments. I love your pretty, Christmassy profile pic. God bless you, my friend. Love, Mary Kay xoxo