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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Ricky
T read your thoughts from A chapter in the book "done."
of how you were telling us readers the cause of you son's tragic death, of how it did so much damage to his brain caused too much fluid; took his young life. It's wonderful to know his soul is in God's abode
Gert


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
    I misin tremendously but he's with me every night when I sleep.
    Within 3 minutes I'm yawning as I'm thinking of him and out like a light?
    The only problem I'm up again three or four times during the night!
    Thanks Very!
    Ricky
reply by Gert sherwood on 09-Dec-2020
    You are so welcome Ricky
    Gert
Comment from k watson
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What an unusual and interesting way to convey such a sad incident. As I was reading along, I was almost hoping or anticipating something fun coming, or something silly, as the picture could lead one to believe a person creating something from your description of rolling or sliding. The images you use help to make your final image vivid and poignant, creating a hopeful conclusion.


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
    Well I've learned in 15 years is no amount of medications cuz psychiatrists mental hospitals therapists friends family priests can do much for that situation.
    Time will heal to a degree but the scar remains.
    But the salve is journaling.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    Still Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory