A Survivor
Three Line Poem entry15 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written three line poem. A courageous heart can break shackles of abuse.spread those wings and fly. Beautiful photo to compliment your poem. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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This is a nicely written three line poem. A courageous heart can break shackles of abuse.spread those wings and fly. Beautiful photo to compliment your poem. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good Morning, June!
How very true are the sentiments expressed in your well-crafted 3 line poetic offering. Courage, indeed. I am realizing more and more as the days turn into years that courage is needed to withstand many situations.
Beautiful and moving artwork.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Good Morning, June!
How very true are the sentiments expressed in your well-crafted 3 line poetic offering. Courage, indeed. I am realizing more and more as the days turn into years that courage is needed to withstand many situations.
Beautiful and moving artwork.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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I am glad this piece on courage resonated with you. Tough situations require much courage these days!
Comment from Wendy G
A short poem of great truth and great encouragement. It is possible, although difficult, to do this. Your picture has been well chosen to accompany your poem. good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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A short poem of great truth and great encouragement. It is possible, although difficult, to do this. Your picture has been well chosen to accompany your poem. good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three-line poem about strength that let us go on even when we are tattered and torn we lift up our heads and walk the path we are destined to walk.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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A very well-written three-line poem about strength that let us go on even when we are tattered and torn we lift up our heads and walk the path we are destined to walk.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Debbie Pope
Kudos for dedicating this one to abused women. Theirs is hard sailing for sure. Your poem is much broader than that though. We all have tribulations that we suffer through and sail out the other side. Hopefully, we sail into that sunlight.
This is an optimistic poem with beautiful alliteration and word choice. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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Kudos for dedicating this one to abused women. Theirs is hard sailing for sure. Your poem is much broader than that though. We all have tribulations that we suffer through and sail out the other side. Hopefully, we sail into that sunlight.
This is an optimistic poem with beautiful alliteration and word choice. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for your insightful comments. Surviving this pandemic would leave us tattered and torn as well! We need to sail into the sunlight - there is a glimmer of hope on the horizon right now...
Comment from Irish Rain
I really like this.
A perfect little poem, with such
a suitable picture...great presentation!
Best of luck to you in this contest Miss June.
Blessings...
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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I really like this.
A perfect little poem, with such
a suitable picture...great presentation!
Best of luck to you in this contest Miss June.
Blessings...
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Thank you! Always appreciate hearing from you.
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Have a great week!!
Comment from Sugarray77
You did a lovely job on this verse that incorporates metaphor as your poetic vehicle. Your dedication in the notes is essential as it adds the depth and resonance you are unable to share in the body of the verse. So well done, June!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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You did a lovely job on this verse that incorporates metaphor as your poetic vehicle. Your dedication in the notes is essential as it adds the depth and resonance you are unable to share in the body of the verse. So well done, June!!
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Yes, this can apply on both a literal and a figurative level. DIfficult to convey the depth I wanted to in 3 short lines. But, readers seem to be getting the gist of this piece. Always nice to hear from you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem is in good form for the contest, June. I enjoyed reading it. Your syllable count is correct and the picture is great. Your words flow well with good imagery. This could be about a ship at sea or a woman who has experienced hardships for any reason--death of loved ones, break up of relationship, etc. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Your poem is in good form for the contest, June. I enjoyed reading it. Your syllable count is correct and the picture is great. Your words flow well with good imagery. This could be about a ship at sea or a woman who has experienced hardships for any reason--death of loved ones, break up of relationship, etc. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks about the courageous women who survived the storms and continue sailing and succeed at the end of struggles in living; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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This poem speaks about the courageous women who survived the storms and continue sailing and succeed at the end of struggles in living; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from patw27
This is a nice adventurous poem. Even through the worst of times, it is important to always remember that there is light at the end of the tunnel. Life goes on. You did an awesome job.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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This is a nice adventurous poem. Even through the worst of times, it is important to always remember that there is light at the end of the tunnel. Life goes on. You did an awesome job.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Yes, there is always light after the darkness. We just need to wait it out. Thank you for dropping by to read and review!
