Where Did Love Go?
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three-line poem about having an affair will certainly hurt the one you are cheating on. It is hard to forgive someone who betrayed you and they cannot be trusted again.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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A very well-written three-line poem about having an affair will certainly hurt the one you are cheating on. It is hard to forgive someone who betrayed you and they cannot be trusted again.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thanks so much
Hugs Trisha
Comment from sammielwf
Bucket list,
Your pen name here is the first point of interest for me- but that may be a story for another poem.
Affairs is intriguing because in its simplicity it is true.
When trust is broken in a relationship because of unfaithfulness I am not sure that can ever be fully gained back. There will always be a kernal of count- thus a relationship with a constant crack in it.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Bucket list,
Your pen name here is the first point of interest for me- but that may be a story for another poem.
Affairs is intriguing because in its simplicity it is true.
When trust is broken in a relationship because of unfaithfulness I am not sure that can ever be fully gained back. There will always be a kernal of count- thus a relationship with a constant crack in it.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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I agree. Thanks so much
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Well said in three lines--countless tomes have been written on the subject--you pegged it succinctly. (Also--thanks for accompaniment--great quote--esp. twist on forgive/forget)
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Well said in three lines--countless tomes have been written on the subject--you pegged it succinctly. (Also--thanks for accompaniment--great quote--esp. twist on forgive/forget)
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thanks so much
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wise and damning words here Trisha as once the line has been crossed many hearts will break. Lust is simply not worth the heart-ache that follows, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Wise and damning words here Trisha as once the line has been crossed many hearts will break. Lust is simply not worth the heart-ache that follows, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thanks so much
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Paula Pivko
That poem is very true you can't undo what's been done. I like the rhythm of the poem and the rhyming. And I feel the writer's sadness over whatever has happened.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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That poem is very true you can't undo what's been done. I like the rhythm of the poem and the rhyming. And I feel the writer's sadness over whatever has happened.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reviewing my poem. It?s a situation that hopefully people will avoid.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from ESOSTINE
Hmmm, good one there! Surely, emotions and passion tend to becloud love relationships driven by lust while true love is lost. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Well written!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Hmmm, good one there! Surely, emotions and passion tend to becloud love relationships driven by lust while true love is lost. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Well written!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Thanks I appreciate your review. Many a couple has been torn apart from the behavior of one partner. Nobody likes to feel rejected.
Hugs, Trisha
